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Riss - uscmam
2009-12-07 . chapter 9
Great chapter.

It wwas nice to see them starting a real relationship.

I cant' wait to see how B'Elanna knowing plays out.
GimmeABeat
2009-12-07 . chapter 9
Gorgeous chapter. This story gets better and better.
You write Janeway beautifully. My favorite part of when Tuvok 'confronted' her.
jelliclesoul635
2009-12-03 . chapter 9
What an intense yet sweet update. It’s somewhat awkward for me, reading this and not imagining Chakotay with her but instead it’s Tom. But I will tell you, I am a fan of this relationship. Keep going, this is an awesome piece. ;)
jelliclesoul635
2009-12-03 . chapter 8
This is excellent, I love the character interactions. Update soon?
Riss - uscmam
2009-11-25 . chapter 8
Another great chapter.

I'm glad that she finally overcame some of her fears. You did a nice job of taking us through her thoughts and keeping us in the story

I can't wait for more.
Steph
2009-11-24 . chapter 8
Yay, finally! :)
milkywaymidnight
2009-11-24 . chapter 8
Oh! This was by far the cutest chapter! I hope she doesn't pull away again from Tom, like she seems to constantly do in my J/P story. But don't worry. They will eventually get together. And do I sense a Kim/Torres pairing coming on? Great story so far! Really helps inspire me with mine! Please do update soon!
sernity1806
2009-11-24 . chapter 8
Cute! My other Janeway/Tom story was update today too, so I am in heaven.

Oh saw STV on DVD in Walmart for like 39 so they are no longer like 100 bucks. So they will be slowly making it down to reasonable prices.
GimmeABeat
2009-11-24 . chapter 8
This is, hands down, the best chapter you've written. Incredibly long, which I love and incredibly awesome.

my favorite line - Being with Tom is like stealing a shuttle and taking it for a joyride.

the whole thing read true to character, from the conversation with seven to the ping pong game and with some wishful thinking ... to the final scene.

I'm sitting on the edge of my keyboard waiting for the next chapter.
Riss - uscmam
2009-11-17 . chapter 7
Another great chapter.

Poor Tom. Janeway is the one relearning who to be, but she's succeeded in tearing him down on the way. The few friends he had are gone. He has no one to talk to because they have all pushed him away or are collateral damage and got pushed away.

I hope that the last lines means there is hope for him.

I can't wait for more.
steph
2009-11-16 . chapter 7
yay! a new chapter. can't wait to see what happens next.
milkywaymidnight
2009-11-16 . chapter 7
Oh, I really am enjoying this story! I'm glad that Tom & Harry sorta made up and I hope Kathryn and Tom get together in the end! Please update soon! Can't wait to see what happens on the planet! You know, I'm a little envious, your J/P stories are so much better then mine. Great job!
GimmeABeat
2009-11-05 . chapter 6
magnificent chapter; i thoroughly enjoyed it. this entire story seems to flow so naturally. can't wait for the next chapter.
collegegirl205
2009-11-04 . chapter 6
aBSOLUTLEY Love it...Please continue!
Riss - uscmam
2009-11-04 . chapter 6
Another nice chapter.

I like the Doc's response!

I can't wait for more
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