|Reviews for The Lucky Charm|
| cfowife 9/28/09 . chapter 1
In one word, AMAZING! Love the plot and your storyline - will anxiously await more & thank you!
| Lululuvstwilight 9/28/09 . chapter 1
What an intriguing first chapter! I am definately looking forward to reading more.
| ecxe 9/28/09 . chapter 1
wow, that was some steaming hot tension! cant wait for more!
| 2luvacullen 9/28/09 . chapter 1
Freaking A! That was a hot little make-out session. I loved your story Going For Gold, and I can't wait to read more of The Lucky Charm. I'm not a huge baseball fan, but I've dated several baseball players in high school and college, so at least I'll be able to follow your baseball lingo for this story.
Here's what I'm assuming so far for this story: Bella is still Charlie's daughter but uses her mother's new husband's last name to go incognito.
I can't wait until Alice and Rosalie gets involved in this story. I see that you have Jasper as a man-whore, hopefully Edward isn't one too. I'm actually tired of reading stories where Edward is a complete man-whore, unless the storyline is awesome, and then I put up with it.
What is your update schedule with this story? I know you have other stories your working on. Just wondering.
Well I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon!
| Liz-Liz 9/28/09 . chapter 1
great first chapter and it seems like an interesting story. please continue and uodate soon
| Ima Quidditch Fan 9/28/09 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh! THE tension in this is unbelievable! I LOVE this story! Love it, and dying for another chapter. Totally see Edward as a hot baseball player, I even thought about a fic with him as a Red Sox player, too funny.
(My DH is a Red Sox fanatic. Far and away his favorite team.)
| AMayes 9/28/09 . chapter 1
Awesome! I'm a Jays fan myself and was tickled they were the opposing team. I know the Red Sox too, my father is a hardcore follower.
What's not to love about this fic? It's got baseball which I used to obsess over, and the characters from Twilight all of whom I currently obsess over.
Great job with building the chemistry between Edward and Bella. It's certainly going to be an interesting ride!
I haven't seen too many players try to steal home in my baseball-watching career. That was a ballsy move on Edward's part! I found myself holding my breath at that part. Did the ump miscall it on purpose?
Looking forward to the next chapter!
| browneyeddaisy 9/28/09 . chapter 1
Wow! Great first chapter! Really excited for Baseballward! It's obvious that you know baseball and that's great.
Looking forward to more!
| HopelessRomantic79 9/28/09 . chapter 1
Oh, exciting! I love baseball, I'm a big Mariner's fan, but I'm still really looking forward to this fic (even if I hate Boston... don't kill me). ;-) Interested to see how you integrate the real players with the Twilight characters. Emmett would SO be a DH. Hehe. Can't wait for more!
| ny88 9/28/09 . chapter 1
Damn! more please :D
| browneyedgirl7723 9/28/09 . chapter 1
Great story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Dollybigmomma 9/28/09 . chapter 1
Sometimes chemistry causes burns...
| jimemon 9/28/09 . chapter 1
Two hot blooded stubborn people brought together, what's not to like? Great work, ladies :)