Reviews for The Lucky Charm
TheDay'sEye 12/16/09 . chapter 3
Can not wait for an update.

I was so so so happy when Edward punched Jasper.
lilyland10177 12/14/09 . chapter 3
I love the fact that you wrote another sports related story! i'm excited to see where you take this one, the character are extreemly different from the ones in going for the gold, especially the way the guys act and react with one 's refreshing to see that their not intitally close with one another because I guess it's giving you a lot more leway into writing about them induvidally. i would love to see what kind of dialouge and interactions you make happen between them! by the way, what are their ages? I can't wait to see what happen next, and i kind of feel like bella has a really dark secret with baseball, possibly relating back to either jacob of phil...hm so many questions! the tension is driving me nuts!
blb1000 12/10/09 . chapter 3
I'm really enjoying this story - partly because I'm a baseball fan - and partly because I can picture Edward in that tight uniform... I enjoy the switched POVs too. Looking forward to the next chapter for these BoSox!
PatientFineBalancedKind 12/9/09 . chapter 3
hey, i think this is a wonderful story! update soon!

-T
gemstoneb1985 12/8/09 . chapter 3
Hey, just wanted to say i'm really enjoying this story, despite not knowing anything about baseball as i'm English and we don't have it over here. I love the tension between Edward and Bella. I may have to have a read up on baseball a bit more now. Love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Scorpio11 12/4/09 . chapter 3
I love these two, and I really enjoyed Bella's talk with Rachel. It certainly explained a few things. Looking forward to Texas.
britzy4744 12/4/09 . chapter 3
love it! please update soon!
2grtkids 12/1/09 . chapter 3
Love how this story is developing. Looking forward to their trip to Texas, maybe they will stop being so stubborn. Sad to see jasper as such a tool, hopefully Alice will come into the picture and tame him.
OliviaJane 11/30/09 . chapter 3
Way to go Bella. Make him work for it girl. lol
Twilight2Midnight 11/30/09 . chapter 3
OMG - can't you just get them together? LOL

I so NEED these two to get it on :) I'm getting sexual frustrated just as much as them (I think... hehehe)

Can't wait for Texas now... hope it wont be too long before they get there :)
twimom76 11/29/09 . chapter 3
Geesh these two need a release and soon! Looking forward to what's next with these two.
Flora Mile 11/29/09 . chapter 3
This story is very cheaky and I love it.

A lot of playfulness and it is great.
twimom76 11/29/09 . chapter 1
Just found your story and its hot so far. Looking forward to where its going!
atmybest 11/29/09 . chapter 3
Impressive fight in the locker room.
KristALchelle 11/28/09 . chapter 3
I absolutely love the UST you're building with these twos. I know the fireworks are on the way, but it is fun watching her make him work for it! Thanks for another great chapter! Krista
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