 Alyssa Proudfoot 4/28/08 . chapter 1 I don't know if you know this, but my name is seriously Alyssa Proudfoot. Spelled the same and everything. I was googling myself and I found this.. so weird! Did you make the name up? |
 Digital Damita 5/2/03 . chapter 8HHahahaa that made me giggle :P |
 Digital Damita 5/2/03 . chapter 7Write more plz? plz? plz? |
 Digital Damita 5/2/03 . chapter 6Gonna have to download that song now |
 Digital Damita 5/2/03 . chapter 5AH! srupid sarah *eats her* how dare she hurt poor janie * hugs her own janie* |
 Digital Damita 5/2/03 . chapter 4I love the little girl Alyssa shes funny more romance mwah awe she cried cutie :)
*sings breaks a few windows* yous a lier, cheating, son of a * *grins* :P |
 Digital Damita 5/2/03 . chapter 3I copied all the chapters ages ago to notepad so I can read it over and over again KISS KISS ! MWAH * |
 Digital Damita 5/2/03 . chapter 2Thats play a game, I read your stuff and you write more? great game :P |
 Digital Damita 5/2/03 . chapter 1WRITE MORE PLZ? its simple and easy like cheese hair shampo |
 iczy 4/15/03 . chapter 8i can't wait until the next chapter comes up! it's a fantastic story, and i just can't stop reading it... hope the next chapter will come out soon! |
 Ro Chyo 3/19/03 . chapter 8Lyssa was right, finally! I'm marveled how Alyssa got to convince Gray to do something like this. She's a very smart girl.
And LOL with the hang man game. Neil is a mischievous one, isn't he?
Is it true Jane said something so cruel about Neil? We should punish her. Traping her with him in an elevator, for example. _
Great chapter! You know I'm already waiting for the next, don't you?
Ah! And... I love ya too! _ |
 Ro Chyo 1/18/03 . chapter 7The story is very interesting. You have known how mix romance, humor and angst.
I like how Alissa is getting something that seemed imposible. What will be her misterious plan A? :)
I liked too those Neil and Jane of yours, I think they are very authentic.
I have a suggestion: Neil want Jane to confess her love to him, but... what about Jane. Is she so confident about him? Would not want Jane to be sure about his feelings too?
OK. That's all... for now.
Please, continue.
Don't leave your readers waiting so much between chapters.
When do you think we can expect the next? |
 Don'tCallMeBones 12/10/02 . chapter 7This is so cute! Keep going! |
 Ovo 12/9/02 . chapter 7I'm scared of backup plan A. It intimidates me. I hope for its success, knowing I might regret this... |
 Robyn 6/17/02 . chapter 2 S'good, keep going |