Oh man, how am I just finding this now??

This is AWESOME!

:D :D you go Cloud, running from those kids! I'd be scared out of my mind to be all alone in that mansion. That just goes to show how much cooler Cloud is than me. :P

I really, really liked the second chapter.

And the first one... how sad! That nearly broke my heart ;__;

This is great! Go go goo! :D :D :D

Good work!

oh dear, what a horrible town Neibelheim is (spelling is terrible)
what with all those nasty little boys!
Yuck
I hate it when people bully others! Its so rude and nasty. Like their own personalities!!
thanks for another snapshot!
wonderful as usual.
the only thing weird i saw was "Cloud could feel every place where the one of them had connected." this sentence made not much sense to me (but i know what it was saying. does that make any sense?? ... I guess I mean, why did you say -where the one of them had connected-? are you saying only one connected? or uhm ... ok thats all I got lol)
sorry for being picky!!
ttfn

*sigh* Cloud finding acceptance from the SOLDIERS after so much rejection for those that should be his family.

The realization of fantasy...

oh man, how awesome is this? ^_^

It's really good. ^-^

i like this one!
it is lovely and descriptive and i am tired and cannot think if much to say,
but i liked it a lot!
:) Cloud and Zack is cute, and Cloud and Zack and Sephy, WELL
thats just an added bonus lol
fabulous writing!

Ah, Vincent acts more like Clouds father then anything else. Sque! I love it!!

aw
:( Cloud gots picked on lots huh
s'not very nice of that teacher
I hope Cloud gets better at everything so he can shame them all out
and then laugh at them.
laugh at them LOTS...
:3