its a little hard to follow, and confusing at parts, but pretty good, keep writing

I love this story!

... how does iggy text if he's blind? O.o

I love this story!

W.O.W. FANTASTIC!

Funny as hell moment:
Fang:

"Go away!" don't leave...

"I hate you!" I LOVE YOU!

Poor Fang...

Read that not talking into account anything in this or any other story. Isn't it funny? Like funny as HELL!

Could you be anymore obvious in that 'hint' hell you could've told us, and it wouldntv'e made a difference...

Good Job. I loved the story and I'm totally checking out the other one :)

What a sweet chapter :D Good job! Congrats on finishing it!
-rowena

aie! awesome! loved it!

that was so sad! but the ending was kinda weird to me cuz i thought they would get wings and stuff b4 the end

OMIGAWD! WHat happens to MAx! Omg this is amazing. YOur seriously talented

Hi hi!

This was a good story, If it were a recipe:
A pinch of gags,
handfull of misunderstood love,
at least five cupfulls of drama,
Two protangonists
A ton of lesser characters
A teaspoon of genetic mutilation
And a grain of total.

Stir progtagonists, and love, leave in plot.
Add lesser characters, gags, and three cups of drama, whisk, Leave for 20 something chapters.
Take darker protagonist, roll in genetic mutation, but back and spread two cups of drama in plot, simmer.
And grain of total

It was good, But I'm afraid it's not the kind of thin that i read. I am not going to read the sequel, but do bear in mind that i don't hate it, Mkays?

please dont make max die but if you do dont make it really sad plz!also this story iz awesome i havent left a review before so yea

omgg ! this storryy was amazing~~!! x i had tears in my eyes lol - gosh tht sounds sad dnt it :O oh well x i think yur an awsome writer and should write sum mre ! x awsomeness x really x

hope to read mre of yur stuff soon x