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john
2010-01-05 . chapter 10
sequel!please
john
2010-01-05 . chapter 8
how is it in 2009 (the wedding) if its 7 years after the clue hunt? brilliant story~!
1101.jade
2009-12-16 . chapter 10
It was marvelous! I love it!
Maggie
2009-12-02 . chapter 10
I love your story! I am totally obsessed with 39 clues, and i almost cried, (for me that is a laugh :)), when Ali was making fun of Dan and wondering what kind of 18 year old is obsessed with ninjas! Everyday me and my friend pretend to be ninjas named Dan. Yes, I am too old for that! I thought the story was VERY creative, and I enjoyed every word of it. I really liked how you gave the different aspects! Keep writing, you're really good!
kloe
2009-11-29 . chapter 10
you really should make a sequel to the 'Natalie Goes Crazy.' yeah, yeah. if you already started it um, well, update it. I've been waiting for more '39 clues' fan-fics to be updated. it's like to only fan-fics i read on this website cuz people make them so AWESOME! don't they?! i think so. well, um, UPDATE CUZ YOUR STORIES ARE TOTALLY AWESOME!
P.S. yes i do know i over-do the 'caps lock' alot. it's just who i am! :)
Lightblaze
2009-11-28 . chapter 10
Nice. Are you going to make it longer? if you are, put some Ian/Amy in it. Otherwise, you should have a hilarious time trying to see if you can write down what Natalie will do to Ali as payback.
Lapulta
2009-11-21 . chapter 10
That was actually really really good. I loved the ending. Keep up the good writing. ~Lapulta~
Ariana Stone
2009-11-20 . chapter 10
Too short! Too abrupt! But I loved loved LOVED the "this is how I want you to remember me" part! Keep writing!!
Love, Ariana
iciclegirl235
2009-11-18 . chapter 10
SEQUEL! really awesome.
elesary
2009-11-17 . chapter 10
have you noticed that ALI is in natALIe?
13Mysterious12
2009-11-17 . chapter 10
AW... So sweet and cute, and Natalie and Dan are together! You made me a fan of this couple! They are so cute together, although I still like Amy and Ian better... But I still love this couple! DO A SEQUEL! OR I WILL FIND YOU! Jk! Sort of... BUT YOU NEED TO DO A SEQUEL! PLEASE?! PLEASE?! Thanks! Lol, love the ending, glad Dan found out about Ali and that Ali is all by her stupid self.
superchic212212
2009-11-17 . chapter 8
Ok. I just spent like 5 minutes trying to figure out why Dan told Natalie she was family...I think something's wrong.
Joelle8
2009-11-17 . chapter 10
This story is really great. I'm so glad Dan made the right choice and dumped that good-for-nothing Ali!
music4evah
2009-11-17 . chapter 10
Aw, cute. But you had a whole bunch of times you when you put in an extra word or left a word out. And once or twice you didn't start a new paragraph when you should've. But this was readable, and it was sweet. :] I like how they go sky diving in the end.
I don't think you should do a sequel. What would it be about? Ali getting her revenge?
Oh, hey, that could actually turn into something...Dan and Natalie are happily married, and they've gone on their honeymoon, maybe have kids, depends on what you want to do, and then Ali comes back.
And ruins it all.
Or tries to, or whatever. Again, whatever you want to do. :]
So I'm 50/50 on the whole sequel thing.
Kris
2009-11-17 . chapter 10
Oh. My. Gosh. I LOVED this story! I am going to vote definitely for a sequel. Make us happy! For me, this story is awesome but it has a cliffy ending, at least I think. (I think that a story NEVER ends) I don't want to start rambling again.

Make that sequel!
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