 Nineorchids 2010-01-05 . chapter 8Sorry to take so long to review.
I loved this chapter. The blood drinking scene was so beautifully done. They way you described Kain and Ruka's thoughts and their physical reactions was lovely. And the poor boy's torment: to have almost everything he ever wanted. Everything but Ruka's heart that is.
It was wonderful the first time I read it over Christmas break and even better now that I've had a chance to re read it.
Keep writing, please. |
 bunnyxx 2010-01-01 . chapter 8Loved it, loved it, loved it. Kain is perfect. In every way. *Sigh* I can't wait for you to write more. I'll be waiting... Haha. |
 bunnyxx 2010-01-01 . chapter 7Oh, another awesome chapter. Tsk, tsk Ruka, forgetting your blood tablets like that. Hahaha. I've been away for a few weeks so I have to catch up on the story, so I'm off to read the next chapter. |
 ColinatorGX 2009-12-31 . chapter 8This chapter was an outright explosion of feelings, from both sides. I really liked it. Keep up the great work and have a nice New Year! |
 Hikara-Hime 2009-12-29 . chapter 8Kya
what a beautiful chapter! I always knew this was going to come up soon enough and it did, and how brilliantly Kain reacted as well ^^
I am glad you didn't have him jump her in the bed immediately, even if she was offering. I can't wait to see how you deal with the next time this kind of situation arises :)
May I just ask, with this set is Kaname with Zero or is Yuuki in the picture?
~H-H |
 earthlyXangel 2009-12-26 . chapter 8*deep breath in*
*deep breath out*
Okay. I'm not going to squeal I think. Maybe. Hehe ARGH it's such an emotional turmoil in this story. I was so shocked at Ruka! *shakes finger at her* Don't be mean to Kain you...meanie...!
8D I'm always really excited to see a new chapter of this story so this was a lovely xmas present for me xD. I wonder how Ruka will feel in the morning..*evil laughter* Anyway, as usual a wonderful chapter, and I'll be waiting for the next one! |
 Vine Sliver 2009-12-25 . chapter 8Wow! I'm very impressed that Kain managed to keep control of himself. A lesser man would probably have jumped Ruka. I know I probably would. They just don't make them like him anymore. This is definitely a new side for Ruka, a teasing sensual side. She enjoyed how much power she had over Kain. Looking forward to the next update.
Merry Christmas!
Vine Sliver |
 Kare29 2009-12-25 . chapter 8Merry Xmas for you too, dear Yen!!
Thanks again for this very much awaited chapter!!
I like so much this story...Kain is such a gentleman, and Ruka..gosh girl dont play around with fire...you will get burned..XD
Anyway, i hope you have a very special holiday with your Family and friends, and thank again for sharing your talent with us, and hope that next year we continue enjoying your stories!!
More Zero and Kaname stories...please...XD
take care Yen!! Felices Fiestas!! con cariƱo, Kare |
 Paradoxismminant 2009-12-25 . chapter 8Aw!!
I liked this one^^...teasing though it is.
Heh. I bet Kain's going to be spending a lot of time in the bathroom now... |
 Akanke 2009-12-25 . chapter 8This chapter was amazing!! I was so excited when you posted it. Damn Kain is too honorable for his own good. But I feel for the both of them. Really eager for the next chapter |
 MariKiryuu 2009-12-25 . chapter 8OMG!OMG!OMG!
This chapter was so perfect. Kain really is a gentleman and so sweet, I love him. He only loses to your Zero in Hold Me. :D
Ah, now I want to read Hold Me again :(
I really love your way of writing, you can keep their personalities just the way they are in the manga.
Thanks for the uploading! |
 Konoha's White Fang 2009-12-25 . chapter 8This is my favorite chapter for sure. Kain's struggle was very well-displayed, you showed that he really is a gentleman for he had refused his dearest wish. Ruka's embarrassment was also very well-written, you kept both of them in character and not even one of them strayed out.
You have improved your style of writing and fixed it to match the two vampires' reactions. I like your way of writing, it's very true and real.
Good luck in your writing and stories.
~KWF~ |
 Dira11 2009-12-25 . chapter 8Woah... these two...i love him for beeing
a gentleman, but how much longer will he torment himself?
But maybe his patience will work out, at least she noticed
for once that he was interested in her.
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You suck me in as always Yen, i love the soul you give your storys
and make them alive with it.
Thank you for the beautiful christmas gift, enjoy
a peaceful christmas.
Dira :) |
 Kerica 2009-12-24 . chapter 8OMG! THAT WAS AMAZING! I LOVE YOU!
Wow...that was really hyper but it's true! XP
What a great chapter, very well written! Oh please, oh please update soon! XD
btw...did you know I have a V/k story of my own up?
Lovies forever,
Bria |
 Aixyutin 2009-12-24 . chapter 8Beautiful chapter! Wonderfully done!
I think you displayed Akatsuki's inner struggle very well. Ruka was absolutely true to character as well.
I always loved the two characters, but I love them even more now after reading this chapter.
Bravo!
Merry Christmas! |