 trimurti 2009-09-29 . chapter 2Came here from 30_kisses and noticed you didn't have any reviews. I don't have much to say myself--it's difficult to dig deep into a drabble--but while I didn't think much of the first one I have to say that the Kagome one is quite nice. It worked because it felt utterly sincere to both Kagome and Shippo and their relationship; it was touching without being overly precious or twee, and I felt a little uplifted when I read the ending. For me, the Miroku one didn't work because it didn't sound so much like him as it did Generic Unrequited Guy in Love, possibly because the 1st person POV focused more on his situation than it did his personality. I do like a good Miroku/Kagome, so I'll follow along and review when I can, unless you don't care for my reviewing style. Good luck on your future drabbles! |