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| Reviews for We Were Nomads, Bathed in Concrete |
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   NeonEnigma88 6/18/13 . chapter 1That was a beautiful story. I loved the irony in how the roles were reversed from the original book. I was all ready to wallow in pity over Edward's loss when suddenly, Bella's back! The transition was a little bumpy though, Also, while I loved the creative title, I couldn't exactly find the symbolism or relation to the story. Maybe you could have named it "We Were Nomads, Bathed In Sunlight", or something that related more to the theme of the story. Other than that, I enjoyed this oneshot and look forward to reading more of your writing! Keep writing! |
| Lulabell75 4/16/13 . chapter 1 OMG! That was awesome! Lula |
| fatpotatoe 2/12/13 . chapter 1 It's only one chapter, but has so much. Thanks, and keep writing. |
| rainydayB 12/29/12 . chapter 1 I LOVE your oneshots! I'm so sick of the typical fanfic endings, or some mess that spews 80 chapters long... drives me insane. I swear if I read another one of those (boy meets girl, they fall in love, girl runs because of her insecurity issues, boy catches up and they live happily ever after) I might vomit. Anyways I just wanted to say great work! And I look forward to your oneshots in the future :) |
| grempler1 12/21/12 . chapter 1 Great story. Loved the twist. |
| Noble Korhedron 11/8/12 . chapter 1 If you've lost inspriation for IVO, PLEASE, PLEASE consider adding to this...? |
| yuuki24688 10/24/12 . chapter 1 you made me cry! |
| Ichiume 9/16/12 . chapter 1 Ah, a very sweet alternate "version" of twilight. :) Love it. Thank you! |
| brenda.warren.1257 9/5/12 . chapter 1 that was beautiful you really should make it astory please think about it |
| Angeldolphin01 7/15/12 . chapter 1 *grabs a box of tissues* I love it. It's incredable sad for the most part until the very end. It's wonderfully written. |
| Elvire23 7/15/12 . chapter 1 Thank you for the HEA. |
| Fictionators 7/14/12 . chapter 1 The Fictionators - has featured your story on our site for the week of 7/13/2012. Thanks, we really appreciate your contribution to the fandom :) Songster for The Fictionators |
| Mystari 6/17/12 . chapter 1 This is the most beautiful, incredible one-shot I have ever read. It's been years since the first time I read this and I've never reviewed and I've come back to read this every time I started reading Fanfiction again, and by now I have the story memorized and yet cannot re-read it without tears. You are an incredible writer. Your work reaches inside and touches the soul. I really, truly hope that you will write more in the near future. |
| ContentedTwiCow 6/6/12 . chapter 1 Great story! Was holding out hope it would turn vamp and was happy to see it happen...love stories that seem AH but then turn vamp :) are you still writing at all? I saw your profile was last updated in 2010...do you think your WIP will still get finished? |
| Dearlybeloved'93 5/16/12 . chapter 1 Very interesting take. :) |
