|Reviews for Undercover|
| Guest 8/17/12 . chapter 3
Is the next part going to show up in another story ?
If not, please update!
| RayenOfDeadStarsAndPlanets 5/9/12 . chapter 3
This is really awesome! I love it!
| Botosphere Fan 9/2/11 . chapter 3
Great :D I love RaFly, she doesn't seem like an oc, she fits in so well, it is almost as if she is canon.
| Star12296 7/25/11 . chapter 3
this is the only story so far i really like i hope you continue this. Update soon! :P
| Second daughter of Eve 11/22/10 . chapter 3
Tada! I love that part, it made me lol.
| Vivienne Grainger 5/23/10 . chapter 3
Clicked the little box that subscribes to "Story Alert."
| Vivienne Grainger 5/23/10 . chapter 1
Hmm ... interesting so far. On to the next chapter (except I'm cheating, 'cause I read that one too and then remembered I'd not reviewed this one. Good authors deserve the payment of a review).
| Vivienne Grainger 5/23/10 . chapter 2
Thank you for explaining ROFLMCAO!
| Rainspiral 1/5/10 . chapter 2
this was a good chortling chapter.
| Eowyn77 11/17/09 . chapter 3
*hehehe* Okay, I just couldn't resist reviewing this one! :) An Autobot making gang signs? *snigger* And shipping her with 'Bee was an interesting twist. Is there going to be some tension between Arcee and RaFly? They're the only two femmes on a planet with every-increasing numbers of mechs - I'm sure the two femmes can SOMETHING work out! ;) LOL Can't wait for the next installment!
| hummergrey 11/17/09 . chapter 3
Bumblebee has old femme girlfriends? Didn't see that one coming. And she can look abandoned? Good in a rural or run down area bad in a downtown business high rise area. Or on a military base. But a hologram overlay would take care of that no doubt. Waiting for her to meet the other Autobots.
| hummergrey 11/17/09 . chapter 2
Glad you kept Mikeala in character as a girl able to handle her own. Too many fics ahve her all body and no brains or attitude. Or running from the other bots. Ironhide laughing his Cybertron butt off was classic! A good reminder they are alien even if on earth with us. Nice touches of detail yet again. Keep writing.
| hummergrey 11/17/09 . chapter 1
Looks like an interesting plot so far. And Wheelie is pretty much her fan club was good detailing with the new bot.
| Anodythe 11/17/09 . chapter 3
Ek, not..."the family"! I love this femme! Anybot who spies on Decepticons and gets away with it has got to made of heavy-duty material. This is a very fun story.
| staidwaters 11/17/09 . chapter 3
You know, I rarely like portrayals of female cybertronians. People tend to go overboard trying to make them "not male" instead of people or leave out the alien robot part and make them into valley girls.
That said, I really like Radio Flyer, even though we haven't seen much of her yet. She's got a sense of humor, is obviously a competent soldier but not a steriotype. She's got obvious robot-type issues, and has an utterly unexpected and delightful personality. It's hilarious having the human female be the bitch queen / warrior goddes, and the millinia-old giant robot be the shy girl, but it makes a lot of sense, because when you get more kick-ass than Mikaela, you wind up with an uber-Xena, and frankly, there are already too many of her in fiction. It streatches the bounds of crediability,and adding in the super-strong giant robot bit to that wanders into ultimate-superheroine-otherwise-known-as-Mary Sue territory. Instead, you have created a real, believable person, and Mikaela is the one who comes off a little three diminsional, which makes sense,as she's acting as a foil so you can bring out RF's character more quickly and efficiently. (That's not a bad thing, incidently. No one who didn't read it three times trying to figure out why I actually like a female 'bot for once would have noticed, it's that slight, and I trust in your writing skills enough to know that you will flesh out Mikaela a bit more once the focus is off RF-it'll probably be compleatly unconscious on your part once you're not so focused on RF-you guys are excellent writers, so please don't worry about it, you don't need to. I was just impressed at how well Mikaela works as a foil for RF, as I've never seen those types of chaarcters used as foils for each other in quite that way, but it works great.) Anhyhow, thanks for the read, it's lots of fun, and I'm looking forward to more.