 seiyuurabu 2009-12-01 . chapter 3Ooh, plot. Bad Lavi, you'll get skewered for sure.
Loved their interactions, but this one the most:
Y'know, maybe we should go to Japan and get hitched. --> to avoid Lavi's body falling to the ground. |
 PlayfulSylph 2009-11-30 . chapter 3I love Lavi's and Tiedoll's happy attitude, but Kanda's stoic and moody attitude paired up with Lavi's really gets me laughing, My stomach still hurts! This is great I hope that you will update soon so I can read more!
~Wuv the Playfulness* |
 the-fish92 2009-11-30 . chapter 3Yay! plot! This just gets better and better |
 Party in the Afterlife 2009-11-29 . chapter 3o.O Lavi what are you doing, being a manipulative shrink? No good, no good I tell you.
And I loved, loved, loved the line about the lava lamp. XD |
 x3HAYden 2009-11-28 . chapter 3HAHAHAHA this is effing cute. Who knew Kanda actually had love for any being? (immobile it may be,it's still an achievement!)
Continue! I like your humour and wit :D |
 Evanescent Silence 2009-11-28 . chapter 3This chapter, my friend, was completely made of awesome. xD I was reading this while I was "working on a project" on my laptop, my father was working on his own laptop across from me, and I had to constantly glance towards my notebook to calm myself down and NOT laugh. You're not supposed to laugh when you're working on a project about cellular biology. xD and I kept covering my mouth with a hand and coughing to hide how I was struggling not to laugh, too... it was damn awkward. xD
anyway, thank you for the awesome, awesome chapter.
~Silence |
 Tossino 2009-11-28 . chapter 3Oh yay, plot! And I like, I like very much. Lavi is a sneaky bastard. I also love that more characters appear. Yay, Lenalee! Yay, Allen!
I like the idea of Cross being Allen's stepdad. I have yet to see it in a fanfic, it's usually uncle. *Approves*
Where the hell did "pancake" come from? XD And what the ** was with the lava lamp metaphor? And the glacier metaphor? Your metaphors ** ROCK! <3
And that is all.
~Toss |
 Morphine Dementia 2009-11-25 . chapter 2 (Oh and, I forgot to mention - Kanda's way of debating on the tree's gender was just...too good. Seriously. I thought I would die. x'D)
And since I'm already posting here, I'll spare myself writing up a message and say "Yo're very much welcome and thank YOU for writing this!"
(Blast you, multiple reviews ban. What if I suddenly remember something?)
I'll be waiting for Wednesday/Thursday then. : D |
 Morphine Dementia 2009-11-24 . chapter 2Wow, just when I thought this couldn't get any better.
Kanda failing at math = WIN. I honestly expected him to at least know his plants, but hell, the "This is KANDA YU'S tree" was just as much WIN as the math fail, and once again I was amused WAY more than it's healthy to be while reading a fanfic! Also, way to go with the puns, "a bee-Yuu-tea-full day", hell, that's just perfect! x'D "Welcome to social interactions with a social **wit, friend." - Yet another brilliant line. And there were so many others that I'm not naming it. Also, I've noticed some more serious streaks in this chapter, what not successfully balances this story between humor and adventure, oh and if I haven't mentioned yet, your characterizations are really good! I don't even need to mention that interactions are totally enjoyable, do I?.. Well, you get the picture.
Love this, and looking forward to the next update, whenever it might be. : D |
 Morphine Dementia 2009-11-24 . chapter 1Alright, I usually point out or quote the things that I liked the most or found incredibly funny, but you just destroyed my chance to do that as there's just TOO MANY freaking lines that made me tremble with laughter as an insane little fangirl, starting with the first part and 'environmental kamikaze' and ending with the umbrella and the house (not to mention that the idea of Kanda loving trees more than people is absolutely hilarious and strangely appealing at the same time). Practically everything was freaking epic, and since you were aiming to write humor, I can wholeheartedly say that you are doing a GREAT job in that.
Awesome work, like, really. Now excuse me, I have to go gigglesnortlaugh and poke my eye in joy some more. : D |
 Sorceress Fantasia 2009-11-21 . chapter 2Really enjoying this now! The interactions between Lavi and Kanda are just hilariously cute. |
 seiyuurabu 2009-11-20 . chapter 2Great chapter! Think I'm feeling more sorry for Yuu than Lavi ^^ |
 Tossino 2009-11-20 . chapter 2...PF! KANDA WITH AN UMBRELLA! XD *Laughs as off* Is it just me that pictures it as a pink one, even if Kanda would NEVER use a pink umbrella, EVER. But I just... can't... resist it... >_< Too funny of an image...
I love how you make Kanda a "tree-hugger" but in a very in-character way. Not that I would call him a tree-hugger in this, more like a predator that keeps a close watch on his territory.
Another epic story. XDD I'm gonna have to watch you. My God. You write them so wonderfully and your humor is so epic. <3
Also, I think that they paragraphs may seem so short because... this is read on a full screen PC or a laptop, which is quite a lot wider than say... a book. They wouldn't be quite as short at all if they were in a book. I think they're perfectly fine. Short paragraphs have a short of charm in my eyes. |
 natcat5 2009-11-19 . chapter 2This story is so awesome! Oh my god Lavi is completely insane! Really, he's crazy. LMao, this is great! I love Kanda Lavi interactions, they are so funny! Is it developing yaoi or just budding friendship?
Update soon! |
 the-fish92 2009-11-19 . chapter 2yay new chapter! man, i love this story even more now. the way you write them so in-character is great, and their relationship is so amusing. somehow, kanda being a dimwit at math really suits his personality, haha |
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