An interesting turn ! A new sorcerer and a new love I hope, it's so sad to be alone, I 'm glad Teelana left the place!

Before Damien even appeared in this chapter I had a theory to the origin of Josiah's illness, after he showed up at the end of the chapter I became even more sure. Damien somehow caused Josiah to be born with a fatal birth defect. For the sole purpose of making He-Man lose his faith in good. For what could possibly accomplish the job better then the unexplained and pointless death of his son.

Wow. Finally, Keldor and Randor make some progress! Tiny though it is...

I'm waiting on the edge of my seat to find out what happens next! I hope Josiah gets better... But for some reason, I get the feeling that Adam's going to go about it the wrong way. When men try to take things into their own hands, things usually only get worse, right? At least, that's how it always seems to end up. Leave it in God's hands, boy!

Thanks for the latest fix.

Poor Adam, yet again having his faith tested.

Omg I am behind. I am soo very happy you two ladies continued with the next book this story has really great angst but to see the chapter on Teela's sword setting the real truth free was awesome great flashbacks. Great fighting scenes and Adam questioning his prayers makes him more of a hero because even he himself can be allowed to have doubts especially when it comes to your own child.

Oh my goodness Adam is doubting prayer. Woah. Can't wait to see the other chapters.

Randor is stubborn but not mindlessly so. Adora is staunchly loyal to those she protects.
I wonder if you haven't unintentionally painted He-Man's past actions as morally dubious. I got the impression that by using more violent measures against Skeletor and other evildoers, he could have taken them out permanently and thus saved many innocents those criminals hurt or killed.
Good luck with NaNoWriMo.

I liked that Adam and Teela finally had an honest conversation about his keeping secrets and seem to be working on improving their relationship.

Good luck to the both of you. Cant wait for Chapter 7.

Thanks a lot for brief reunion between Lyn and Father, a dream is better than nothing!

There are some really well written emotional scenes in this. Please update soon.

Great use of Fisto and I really enjoyed the Orko bits; another solid chapter!

Nice chapter, I was starting to hate Randor!!

Well, I'm glad that's over with. The tension was thick enough to cut with a knife... and Randor was being really stubborn. Erg. And I really want Josiah to get better soon. I can't stand seeing a baby in pain, or even reading about it. Poor Josiah... *cries*

I didn't quite expect the Sword of Truth to be pulled out so quickly, but it's a lot cleaner than Keldor puking all over the throne room. It's not like the royal family would trust their new lifestyle anyway...they'd think it was all part of the elaborate plan.

I love how you still throw in the funny aspects like the finger drumming and the satisfaction of vindication part.