| Reviews for The Ribbon: Marcus's Tale |
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Guest 7/2/12 . chapter 6 I love this. It's so good to read about the Volturri pre-twilight. Thanks! |
Josephine Baker 12/18/10 . chapter 6I love the history that you have created. I can't wait to read more... will you keep writing? |
SkittleE 7/17/10 . chapter 6I love this story! It's amazing. There have been so many Marcus and Didyme stories and this one is the best by far. I would give an honest review that would probably be as long that I could make it go, but unfortunately, today is now yesterday and tomorrow is now today, so I have to go to bed. But you should know that this story is awesome, well written, and it's inspiring a Marcus/Didyme story of my own which I did absolutely no research for. Update soon! |
felinavamp 7/7/10 . chapter 4Hi, i've been reading this story from the beggining but i found it on Wattpad. Loved the depth you created for the Volturi characters. It seems you did a lot of researcf for this story and it paid off-because it's great. I loved the tale about Caius, he's so missunderstood and hated by many but i've always liked writing! |
seawaterwitch 6/13/10 . chapter 5 I like the way Marcus teased Aro This is my fave chapter. Pssst... I think you're good than original writer. Pardon me, but Mrs. Meyer never give any description on her character stories. But you give so much info I really love it v I love your writing, just keep writing |
seawaterwitch 6/10/10 . chapter 1I love it Although Didyme has blonde hair? Isn't she jet black hair just the same with Aro's hair? But I love your works anyway v |
Merina 2 5/11/10 . chapter 3this is so fantastic :D |
kiki-twilighter-ever 3/25/10 . chapter 6this story is really good. it's a new and original idea, and i love it. update please? |
helena 2/10/10 . chapter 4 I love this story! I love the personality you gave to Marcus. I can totally believe that he would have been this way before didyme's tragedy. please please please Please update soon! Your chapters are amazing and you are a gifted writer. please continue! |
tetera 1/25/10 . chapter 4 ah! marcus and didyme are so cute together! i love what you have done with this story. so detailed and interesting! please update soon! great work! |
TRDancer 1/10/10 . chapter 6Didyme and Marcus' exchange at the end is cute, haha. So is the part in the water. I love this chapter, too. Obviously Augustin sees that Aro is going to kill Didyme. Now that I say that, I feel like I'm wrong, but... OMG BRAIN OVERLOAD. XD Anywho, my browser's spell check is going nuts over these old time names. And you rock for writing this. 3 |
TRDancer 1/10/10 . chapter 5Damn that Pythagoras... but the Pythagorean Theorem is easy, so it's okay. Love this chapter. The background info and such is so interesting. I especially love that Aro was attacked by those Crete vamps. Makes me LOL at the brain image it gives me. You are so clever. I'm glad I went ficdiving instead of bothering to write this kind of story myself. This is much better than anything I would ever write. :P 3 Off to the next! |
TRDancer 1/10/10 . chapter 4Somewhere in this chapter, I fell in love with Marcus. He's so awesome. :P "They were like a couple of alley cats sometimes, backs arched, fur standing on end, spitting and snarling." - I love this analogy. And Sulpicia and Athenodora's banter. It's great. Off to the next...! |
TRDancer 1/10/10 . chapter 3Why do people insist on pulling me away from glorious writing? *sigh* Anyway, this was quite amazing, as the other chapters were. I am so fascinated. :P "But women will always be a mystery, even to immortals, who have eternity to figure them out, but never shall." - This made me laugh. "Twisted, tangled, intertwined, all of our lives, encircling and binding one another…like the ribbon about my wrist." - I absolutely LOVE that. Great chapter. Off I go to the next, which will hopefully not take me ten billion years to read. |
TRDancer 1/10/10 . chapter 2I love Caius' story. Bah. You are driving me crazy with love for this story. It's amazing. ...must. keep. reading. 3 |