 monkeyillusion 8/29/10 . chapter 13Ok then- I hope to be reading more soon _ |
 PsychoticYuki367 8/27/10 . chapter 13I hope you get back to writing soon. I know how you feel (struggling with writing and all), so take your time. But I'll look forward to reading whatever it is you dish out :3 |
 DaAmazingMeepers 8/27/10 . chapter 13Aww, but I like this story!( Ah well, I'll go check out your new account now.3 |
 Star Hart 8/13/10 . chapter 12Please update soon. |
 DaAmazingMeepers 7/28/10 . chapter 12Ooh, creepy!. Poor A'isha, she has to spend her time with a psycho. More soon please!3 |
 BlackCoyote 7/10/10 . chapter 10love this! this, I declare, is so far my favorite chapter. the ending was awesome! |
 BlackCoyote 7/9/10 . chapter 2wow I love all this drama. can't wait to read more! :] |
 Miko Hayashi 5/28/10 . chapter 12I has an idea as to what Danny did to A'isha! :O I think Danny raped her on her birthday, and after that happened, A'isha called her parents to come home immediately, which with them rushing, came about the car accident. If I'm right or mostly right, can I get a cookie or a brownie? :D |
 DarkShootingStarMagician 5/23/10 . chapter 12damn. you have a way with words, now im very...er intrigued. :D
lol good chapter. write soon if u can
DSSM |
 MewPhoenix 5/23/10 . chapter 12ok i have only one idea of what Danny might have done to A'isha...but i'm REALLY hoping that its not it o.o...
hehe Marik with homoerotic mags...still can't stop laughing of the image of him being gay :P
can't wait to read more
update soon :D |
 monkeyillusion 5/23/10 . chapter 12ZOMGOJDALDHOAD6HAPOD! wait.. give me a second... OFDLMFLKNF.. wait for itt.. OK I'm calm! sorry I just get all jittery when i read stories with such amazing plots and twists- ignore the random letters and... probably numbers in there too- my hands wont listen to me! YOU. ARE. AWESOME! |
 Shadow Dice 5/22/10 . chapter 12Great story, the plot is great! I lie how you kept the undertones of evil within Marik's character, it adds alot more depth :) Your OC is well-made because her past holds many unanswered questions that pulls the reader in. I hope you stay with this story and keep updating! |
 PsychoticYuki367 5/22/10 . chapter 12(stupid computer trying to keep me from reveiwing -_-)
Oh Marik... we simply must improve your woman-handling skills XD
I'm getting ideas of what Danny has done to Ish, none of them pleasant... 0.0
I look forward to more updates! |
 The Duelist's Heiress 5/22/10 . chapter 12I liked it.
TDH |
 monkeyillusion 4/8/10 . chapter 11ZOMG mate you are epic! (BTW I don think never heard those songs I'm gonna have to look em up :)) you really know how to story structior (i can't spell :S) and i LOVE this story! |