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Harry Potter 1/13/02 . chapter 6
Wow, great, job, please continue. Is Tom going to die? Hurry!
FrogHopper 1/13/02 . chapter 6
Oh... tell me Voledmort isn't going to rape Tom? Isn't he a tiny bit young? Even so, it's still a really good story, I was quite surprised by how scared I was when Voldemort came. Somehow calling him the Dark Lord does make it seem worse. Something else Dumbledore sr was right about! I hope Tom doesn't die, but I don't think he will, Jay, though... maybe?
kool 1/11/02 . chapter 2
COol Dude! Write more-I'm going to read more too! hehe..
shmee 1/11/02 . chapter 3
VERY GOOD!

Nicely written, hurry up with what happens next!
FrogHopper 1/11/02 . chapter 2
Tom's a parselmouth, eh? Interesting, for a Dumbledore. Hmm... I wonder what this could mean. Nice story, once I'd got over the horrible thought of Dumbledore actually having a child at 150 years old *g* Good OCs, btw, not too Mary-Sue-ish at all. Keep writing!
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