I loved it. That was so funny. I like how you set it up as well. At the beginning you could feel how slow and boring it was for them and then just like with Flambe, at the end it exploded.

I think you had all the characters just right. It was so much fun to read this. Great job.

this was hilarious.

Heh heh. Very funny- although it would have been even better if you had remembered that R.J. LOVES chocolate anchovies, because R.J. is awesome like that.

WOW

Thank you for answering my challenge!

And the whole RJ/Dominic vibe was really well done. And great to see you still around and writing to my friend!