This is actually on of my most favorite SpainXRomano story ever! Much love to you dear!

and another thing...
yes And Thus- I Fangirled is right about the verb but not about the conjugation. so instead of "no lloras" it would be "no llores" or "no llore"(if you want to tell it with respect to an older person)
no lloras = you don't cry.
and I think the tittle is just fine cuz "tu lo lamentas" is like...a fact rather than a question.
:)

hello mi querida escritora ^^
I liked the story...it was so cute :)
though I have to confess I thought it was going to be a little more angsty. but I like it the way it is.
now listen up! I'm gonna be a real sweetheart and tell you this:
no grite = don't shout not don't cry.
no llores = don't cry.
believe me...I know 'cause my mother taught me^-^

Wow...just wow. The words flow together so beautifully! I could definitely picture everything just like a movie. Romano's just a little OOC, but I think it works, or else it wouldn't have kept the romantic atmosphere. And I really like how short and sweet the dialogue is and how little they actually say to each other, because in a moment like that, only three (well in the case of Spanish two) words are needed. Very touching story. I loved it!

Ah, I made a mental note to review this earlier and for some reason I never did XD This was absolutely ADORABLE. I'm falling in love with this couple more and more everyday and this was just the perfect amount of fluff <3 Oh, I do have one thing about your Spanish though (even though for some reason it seemed like you took it out of the story O_o) but I liked how you put the Spanish in there and I liked how you put "don't cry" in Spanish too however I'm pretty sure the verb for that is "llorar" and conjugated it's "no lloras." And while your grammar other then that is fine it's a bit formal for how close those two are. You can change the title to "Tu lo lamentas?" or even just "Lo lamentas?" You use the same conjugation when you say "te quiero." Okay, I know I'm like randomly ranting about Spanish but I'm also going ot have to thank you, I have a test on Tuesday and this actually helped me practice XD GOOD FIC WRITE MORE SPAINxROMANO PLZ D=

uwah cute >3<
Spainxromano needs so much love D:
*cough the sex scene was too short though :p cough*
Oh btw, I'm your Spanish reviewer here!! Spanish from Spain 3<)
lots of luv from the country of tomatoes (they're yukky :/)!!

I love this, its so romantic. (Okay, partially because almost all of the dialogue is in either Spanish and Italian).

Of course, it was hard to follow. Just a bit. I wanted a bit of a background to the story, how they came to have this conversation and stuff... but in a way the fact that it doesn't just makes it all the more special!

love this! SpainxRomano make such an amazing pair. You did an amazing job conveying their affections for eachother.
great job!
btw: that "lost in a sea of jade" line, was ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!

Totally know what you mean with the "movie" thing!! (Sorry to start my review like that, but I get that all the time and it bothers me so much when I can't get the right words!!)

So, I'm gonna go ahead and say that this was awesome! (Then again, I might be biased with my OTP being SpainxRomano...) The line about Spain's voice was really well done. Actually, your descriptions were all well done!

Can't say I can help with the Spanish or Italian. I speak French and English fluently, but my Spanish is not nearly on par... yet. And I don't even try to have any idea what I'm doing when it comes to Italian. XD

Anyway, you posted an awesome SpainxRomano fic, which gives you like a bazillion awesome points in my book!
Ciao~! :D
~ Yolapeoples

ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!