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my untold fairy-tale
2009-10-03 . chapter 1
I saw the title and knew I had to read this fic. Kacy + 'ninja' = instant win.
I would say that only Kevin would say something like 'Loves is like a ninja' but I've been known to say some random things for example Edward Cullen is like a math test. Sometimes Kevin makes more sense than I do.
I loved the beginning. If I saw Kevin sitting across the table with pudding on his face I would laugh to. Stella's conversation with Kevin was priceless. Only Kevin would get frustrated because Stella didn't tell him he was in love with Macy. She's right Kevin kissing Macy would probably put her in a catatonic state, but that's half the fun lol.

Ok, the ending was so sweet and adorable and I loved it. I'm being a total fangirl, but I can't help it. It's the little things I love, like the hand holding and the last lines.
xovickixo
2009-10-02 . chapter 1
Oh, this was just sweetness! The 'ninja' use is perfect, makes a great analogy. Loved being able to read Kevin's pov as it slowly occurs to him that he is very much in love with Macy.
"Now if only convincing herself to do something was that easy." -- this was a great little aside for Stella.
Thanks for the wonderful Kevin/Macy read!
Allieg8tor
2009-10-01 . chapter 1
Aww, how cute!!
Kevin and Macy are so meant for each other, I've thought it since Keep it Real and I'll probably think it forever as far as the show goes!
Great ending! <3
ride2night
2009-09-30 . chapter 1
That is one heck of an analogy:D
Love is so like a ninja!
Glad Kevin caught on;)
Great entry!
~Lori~
Tna-Alysse
2009-09-30 . chapter 1
So adorable and philosophical at the same time! I love how you manipulated Kevin's character to offer insight to such a complex and abstract concept such as Love. It's such a hard theme to face and handled it beautifully, especially using Stella as a reflection of Kevin's inner thoughts spoken aloud. Bravo because #1 the fic rocks and #2 Kacy!
suburbs
2009-09-30 . chapter 1
Love it! I thougth that quote had Kevin written all over it, so I was so excited that you had written it for him. And I was so relieved that someone wrote something - serious, I was afraid I was going to post a challenge and no one would participate. But instead, I logged on and found your awesome story. The ninja connection was fabulous. Great job!
JDPhoenix
2009-09-30 . chapter 1
I love this story, it's so cute. Kevin's whole "now what?" moment was perfect, because, while it's a very Kevin thing to say, it's also a very serious question. And that whole Stella background stuff just made it so much better, it added a whole new dimension to what was already going to be an awesome fic.
Sweetgalsab
2009-09-30 . chapter 1
Aw!! Wooww!!
I'm gonna try the challenge and it'l be my first fanfictions - but I won't be able to match up to THIS!!
This is amazing - I always love what you do - and here you've just kicked it up to the next level!
I love the last line - he didn't care - he loves the results!!
Truly loved it..just wonderful!
Sabrina
xoxo
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