I LOVED this chapter! I can't wait to read what happens next.

Heh, I swear that even if your story absolutely sucked I would still follow along just for your little banters at the beginning and end. So funny...but other than that, I'm really enjoying this so far and will be looking forward to the next chapter! It's well written and has a nice plot so far, so keep it up!

Amane I love her :D
Good job, I'll wait for your update

I LOVED this chapter! I can't wait to read what happens next.

Damn, this story is getting good!! So looking forward to the next chapter!! Hee hee.. ;)

I love this chapter
Can't wait to know what happen next with shizuma :D
Keep writing

shizumaXnagisaXamane
I love it!!
Wait for your update

I LOVED these three chapters! I can't wait to read what happens next.

wow things become interesting
I love shizuma's reaction and I agrre with you Hikari is boring haha
Keep writing, wait for your update

Haha, I love how you end the chapters. XD Wine? Of course.

Anyways, I'm very glad that you updated! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. The 29th, you say? I'll hold you to it. =P

*ahem* Man I haven't reviewed a story in a while, but let me start off by saying. That this is to say the least a very interesting look on this series.

Now onto a heavier subject. Do you mean for this to be OOC? (( Out of character, in case you didn't know)) The reason I ask this is because so far two characters have been OOC: Nagisa and Amane. Nagisa would never snap at Shizuma like that, even if she was trying to defend someone else. 2. Amane is far far to shy to even consider acting like she did...flirting.
It's alright to have people ooc but please warn them for people like me, who don't care for oocness.

One last thing to add. Kagome and Kizune ((whatever her name is)) are in Lilum not Spica

I'm sorry to give such a harsh review. If you meant it to be this way then I apologize. But if you wanted to make it follow the series a little then please take my advice in a good way and use it to better your story.

anything to add?
make this story a threesome!

ShizuNagiAma!

yataa!

To be honest I don't read much outside of TamaoXNagisa because they are my pairing of choice, but I decided to take a gander at this story and found it very train wreckish. I mean that in the best possible way, over and over again I found my self on a similar thought track as Nagisa when Amane continued to flirt with other girl's. It simply seemed so unlike her but at the same time I found it incredibly compelling and couldn't bring myself to stop reading it.

Honestly I think that it might be playing up on two factors for me, one my general distaste for Shizuma, and two I honestly have a very hard time liking Amane because I find her so damn boring as she was in SP!.

I know that I am leaving a werid review but I really can't wait to see how you continue with this story.

Hi, I love your story. The other side of amane i think, and i agrre hikari is boring ;D

Pretty interesting story you got here. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters. By the way, you got Tamao's name wrong. It's Tamao not Tamoe xD.