That was comical, but felt like it could have been better/worse.

Omigod, is this supposed to be FREAKIN' HILARIOUS!?!? I had me some good laughs. =)

Eh, I'm a huge fan of your work, but I think this lacked the punch of the first Digimon stories (espeically Digimon 2: Return of Digimon, that was ** epic).
You don't have enough typos that read out in funny ways (like EW MUST ESCAPE OUT OF HERE FASTLY!), and their doesn't seem to be that much going on. Plus it feels like your forcing it, like you didn't really want to write the story.
It had its moments like the end of chapther 1 and "Auithors notel Digimon is a new Digimon because there is not actual Digimon that is called Digimon he is a new one that I invente".
This wasn't bad, but it wasn't anywhere near as hillarous Digimon 1,2 or Quarter Life. Next time, write when you feel like, you'll probably get a better result

TIMEFUL KICK TO THE VERY DOOR

I have always been a great fan of your work and as usual you failed to not amaze me. Keep up the good work and hopefully your work will be recognised by publishers and whatnot.

"You kicked me in the invisible"

CLassic bro. Just classic.

(*Youtube ThatBloodyPirate1 ,Thats with THREE ones at the end) /user/ThatBloodyPirate1

From the very beginning I was laughing. "I ma goinna crush" Hilarious, but I still can't shake the feeling that he's trying to make mistakes this time, like I said before.

Peter Chimaera, if you read these comments (And I'm sure you must) Are you serious about this? This story has the most spelling and grammatical errors of any story you have posted to date. You know, if you TRY to put in mistakes it kinda spoils the magic of these amazing stories...

But regardless, it IS funny, and I must say, the randomness of the last sentence had me laughing for a good long time, "So they had a dinner but officer Victorix did not come because he was very busy."

Is it just me, or does it seem like he's TRYING to write poorly this time? I mean, I'm still turning this into a movie (youtube ThatBloodyPirate1), but honestly...

I saw this on YTMND, great one

Yes. Yes. Yes.

You're back! AWESOME!

This was the best Digimon yet. For months I've been reading other stuff that tried to imitate your style, but no more. Now we can send out the message:

The master is back, people, and hell yeah, he brought stories!

this may very well be your magnum opus!

"You kicked me in the invisible"

Best line I've read all day, dude.

Thoroughly engaging! I enjoyed every gut-wrenching minute of it.

"IT IS NOT A GOOD TIME FOR A CHILDREN TO DIED"

Not, it most certainly is not.

I WANT MORE OF THIS EPIC STORY, MORE!