Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: The Journey - Page 1 of 5
kylemoor
2009-05-25 . chapter 2
This is a suggestion for if the story is continued: In later chapters (past 7) it might be good to have Akane as a stronger character, taking on certain adversaries instead of Ranma fighting all of them. What is the purpose of having Akane being a master of Anything Goes is Ranma takes on every problem they face, or has to take over for Akane becuase she got hurt along the way?
kylemoor
2009-05-25 . chapter 7
I don't know if you would go all the way through the series like this but the story so far has been good. I don't remember how accident prone Akane is in the manga/anime but since she has been studying with Ranma for 10 years in this it might be a good idea to make her a little more graceful in this version.
Sexy Neko Hibiki
2006-11-12 . chapter 7
Whoah! This is good! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
lilangelita
2005-12-14 . chapter 7
I've loved this fic for years and I really hope you get this and update. I reviewed before btw!! That's how awesome I think your fic is. Please continue!! XD
"The One and Only But Never Lonely" lilangelita a.k.a. Krystal
Gundum M
2004-10-30 . chapter 7
that was... interesting.
Marquis Les'Quack
2004-09-02 . chapter 7
LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! LEMON!...LEMON! want more R/A action. just kisses isn't good enough. For christ's sake its PG, there is sex in PG movies, but if you put in something graphic change it to R!
Krystal
2004-06-09 . chapter 7
Hey, I've got to say that this fanfic has probably been the best I've ever read! I love it that Ranma and Akane are married, but what about Ukyo? Are you going to put her in too? I'm just wondering, anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
You may call me... Gamon
2004-05-08 . chapter 7
Nice job so far. I like it.
Here's my suggestion:
I think that whoever you decide to have come and visit Ranma and Akane from the Amazon village, you should have that person bring Ranma and Akane's marriage papers with them. Then Ranma and Akane can have their marriage registered with the government of Japan, and get a Japanese marriage liscense to go along with their Chinese/Amazon marriage liscense. 'Cause even if they were/are members of the tribe, they were/are still Japanese citizens by birth (I think, I'm not exactly sure how the different Asian governments work!).
Another thing that you could do is make it so that the one who visits them left the village a little while after they did, but right before the Musk attacked. That way their visitor wouldn't know the direness (is that even a word?) of the situation back in China. A great dramatic twist in my opinion.
But, it's all up to you. You're the writer, so write how you like (but could we please see a little more 'romantic' interaction between Ranma and Akane, as opposed to them just talking to each other?)!
Sylvah Tigah
2003-07-06 . chapter 7
Rinse. *snickers* i absolutely love this, and i can't wait for more. i swear, i'll die if i have to wait. this is better than the series :)...okay...equal to the series, i have to give the original extra kudos 'cause they're it's like...the original. oh, well, if you count the fact i give them extra kudos, and then you take away those same kudos, you've won. yay for you. can't wait for more! ~Sylvah Tigah
KIM
2003-07-04 . chapter 1
Totally similar if not exact idea/story from Cursed Love by Fiochan. Sorry, but I have to say that Fiochan is a better writer. Please don't hate me, but I'm just being honest.
Lynn
2003-05-21 . chapter 7
UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!
UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!
UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!
UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!
UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!
onegai?
Garden of Shadows
2003-05-16 . chapter 6
Hey this is such a great fanfic

*please update soon*
justafan
2003-05-16 . chapter 7
I really like your story, this is a great alternate version of the original ranma story

PLEASE KEEP GOING
Lynn
2003-05-13 . chapter 7
i've seen this scenario many times before but none was good as yours. Even though its kinda like a rewrite of the actually ranma manga/anime but it got the twists in it due to their conditions and i absolutely love reading it and couldn't stop. Please update soon.
Roger J. Phillips
2003-05-09 . chapter 7
I just finished chapter 7. I thought it was good. Just one problem, it was somewhat hard to read. Could you please go back to the format that you used for your other chapters? Please keep up the good work, and I hope to read chapter 8 soon.
Return to Top