Beautifully written. The characters were believable, which really made the story more convincing.

woah i didn't know this story was the sequel to ur other story...i really liked this one too...

I'm open to almost every pairing in FFX, but there aren't many good Auron/Lulu fics out there. Yours is one of the good ones, so congrats and keep on writing!

This is a really good story. Keep it up.

MWAA! XD Auron and Lulu are my favorite pairing! *Bows deeply* I LOVE your work! AuronLu forever! *Giggles* Rikku and Auron just... *Cringes* And I would rather have Chappu alive and with Lulu than Wakka... BUT NO! Then there would be no AuronLu! I can't imagine it! *Faints*

People: O_o dork...

love thoes two, they made the game worth playing and honestly its beyond me why they matched Lulu with Wakka insted of Auron, bah anyhow the story is loverly, love how you made the chars react to one another even through i hate short stoires this one was good thanks for writting it.

To me, AuronXLulu seems to be the only feasible in-game couple-and you do such a good job of writing them! I love this story.

Great. Beautiful. Sad. More i cannot say.

I *love* Auron/Lulu...but there just aren't enough fics of them out there! I'm so glad I found this...It was a wonderful story. I liked Auron's last line the best. ) So so sweet.

Wow, yet another great piece. I really wish you'd write more; I'd love to read it.

I loved it! LuluxAuron forever... Aurikku sounds like some disease! Great story!

This story is too good!

Please,do more Aululu fics!1

despite the fact that i dont know whats Avalon mean , i really like your style , fitting Lulu perfectly , but its a little over doing it with Auron, i always throught of him as a harder to reatch char.

once again nice job.

PS. cant a black mage bring him back from the farplan? * smiles wicedly *

very nicely done.

i liked it. mainly on the fact that it was so good and that you did an odd pairing.

for some reason, in fanfic land doing anything other than auron/rikku, tidus/yuna, and wakku/lulu is sacraligous.

so you get **** 4stars for that.

keep going with originality!

we need more of these kind

Wai! I've been waiting for an Auron/Lulu fic! Keep up the good work!