Unusual but cute. It's nice to think that the council members weren't always such asses (donkeys)

Nice introspective, I never gave that much thought to Hiruzen's teammates except that they were unlikable

"The real reason Tobirama has white hair: his students." HAHAHAHAHAHA. i like that

really good

Nice. Liked the paralels you made.

I never, ever, ever tire of your Team Tobirama insights. They're endlessly funny, believable and creative.

I laughed pretty hard at several of these, but I think my favorite was number 17, the ending in particular:

'Tobirama takes one look at them squabbling and realises Konoha is doomed.'

ROTFL XD

Great work!

Oh, I love this. Thanks for the insightful look into the past.

Oh look -rolls eyes- It's GoodyTwoShoes again...

Anway... this was funny and a little sad at the same time.

I love number 2: Tsunade being a nightmare as a kid, and 17. Tobirama thinking that Konoha is doomed because of his students. Add 18 too. Lol Konoha is STILL standing... just keep ignoring them Tobirama!

Also love the reason why Tobirama has white hair XD

Hahahahah! Oh, I love how Tobirama has white hair because of them. You know, it really is sad how far Kaharu and Homura seem to fall. Yes, their grandkids will succeed where they could not. They will not forget what it is to be young. Yay for nearly having nervious break downs.

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