|Reviews for Secrets|
| Alexis 5/3/13 . chapter 24
I believe I know who the father is...but anyway please keep writing
| animeluverforlife 5/2/13 . chapter 24
I luved this fiction one of THE best I've read! Plz Plz update soon.
| merixandrea.vega 5/1/13 . chapter 1
Plllzzzzzzz update i love ur story and i would love to read more til the end :)
| trinity456 3/29/13 . chapter 24
Omg you need to QUICKLY POST THE NEXT CHAPTER THIS STORY IS AMAZING. AMAZING.
| anon 3/21/13 . chapter 24
Oh no, I ran out of chapters to read. Now I'm really curious about who the father is. I hope he's someone we actually know from the manga/anime and not just some random s-rank ninja. But the way some of the characters act when they hear his name, it seems like they don't know him.
Also, I think it might be a little unrealistic that Hinata is as banged up as she is, considering that Tsunade was there to take care of her. Tsunade's healed up people with injuries on par with or even greater than Hinata's, I just don't see her as being incapable of healing her further. Hinata's got me really worried now, but I'm guessing that you wouldn't put her in a coma only to kill her off next chapter. It's too sad, not Hinata and Neji can't have a baby together.
Can't wait for updates! It actually makes me feel better that there was a year between updates last time, because it hopefully means that you won't abandon this story.
| anon 3/20/13 . chapter 11
I love the way you've written Chouji in this so far. Usually, in the manga and the anime, his character is pretty boring, but your version of Chouji has me cracking up. 'Don't want to discriminate'. Haha
Other than that, I just want to say that your story is well written and has a nice flow to it. None of the characters seem horribly OOC to me. You've made your writing entertaining, which is harder to do than one would think. And I really like the interactions between Hiashi and Neji. Hiashi's being surprisingly cool about this whole ordeal. Maybe that part could be considered OOC, but I prefer things this way. Keep up the awesome work!
Oh, one minor critique - Pickles seem like such a cliche pregnancy craving in stories. I would've gone with something else, like... Hmm, actually it's harder to come up with something than I thought. Bah
| skiea 3/15/13 . chapter 24
hurry and update
| meadora-chan 3/5/13 . chapter 24
Tbh, I am about to DIE. Your story is beautiful, on-edge and heart-splintering. I love every part of this fic, intensity and all. The Hinata-and-Neji interaction was amazing, and their love built slowly, but surely.
The one thing I really appreciated was the way you dealt with serious issues. The rape, the nightmares, the gossip, the clan- these were done realistically, and not all fairy-tale esque. You created a masterpiece.
Enough fluff. Basically, I meant to say I enjoyed the story. 'Nuff said. I hope that you would please, please continue with this fic. I understand the writer's block, and I understand the fact that we all have a real life, but I, and I am sure many others, are anxiously awaiting your next installment. This is, after all, the first fanfic that I have read that has truly dealt with the symptoms of reality. I hope you are able to finish; I genuinely loved this story from its start to its end.
One more thing- may we please know the father? I have a few guesses, but a girl can only imagine. (:
| Fenris Jin 2/22/13 . chapter 24
This is quite a gripping turn of events. Well, at least the S-nin had powerful enough kekki gekkai to cause that much harm, although unfortunately it's at Hinata's expense.
Come now, these people have too little trust in Neji's sanity, provided no one could possibly blame him,. I bet he's just there cuddling the infant, or more possibly staring at it wondering how similar she is to Hinata and what he should name her. Considering that kid is the only child Hinata will ever have, it's almost understood that that little girl would be his default daughter. Anyway, she has the Byakugan, there's a high possibility that the kid would have white eyes, it won't be hard to pass her up as his kid.
Poor Kiba though..
| 1Leesha 1/25/13 . chapter 24
I've spent all day reading this wonderful fic and all I want to do is be able to read more! That being said, I really really really hope you decide to come back and update at some point in the near future!
| Nanda Magnail 1/21/13 . chapter 21
PLEASE UPDATE )))))':
| Moonprincess202 1/20/13 . chapter 24
This story is brilliant! Please update it.
| MaeMusicMelody 1/19/13 . chapter 24
Oh gawd. Please please pleeeease update this story! Ive been readin this for 3 days straight refusing to put it down unless my mom makes me.
This us such a dramatic story and i love it so much. Uuuughhh the feels! I laugh and cry so much because of this one fic... thank you for making such an incredibly written story!
Please update sooon. The suspence is literally killing me! HINATA-CHAN DONT DIIIE ;n;
| Guest 1/17/13 . chapter 24
Aaaaahhh please please please update soooon?!
| nikols 1/8/13 . chapter 24
I do realize that authors have lives too but, can you update? It's been a long wait almost 7 months! And I'm just dying to know what comes next but I guess for now I'll just re-read it again.