 Matariki 2009-12-02 . chapter 1Ahh.. I'm in love. x |
 xXxAstrumxXx 2009-10-12 . chapter 1This was great.
In character too.
<3 |
 Moonlit-Jeannie 2009-10-06 . chapter 1Aw, that's adorable. And sad. I love flangst, though. Esp. right now. Blergh, I really should be writing, but I read entirely too much. Great job and I'm glad I finally got to read this! |
 bsloths 2009-10-06 . chapter 1Great job Symone! I like the idea that Kurt really wanted his first kiss to be with Finn, and that Finn was nice enough to try to make it special. I think that right there is IC.
I don't really think there is enough here to judge much characterization, though. I could definitely picture the characters as I read, which was great, but I can't wait to see you do more so I can really get a feel for how you handle them. But I'd say, so far, so good!! |
 Super Reader 2009-10-02 . chapter 1That's so sweet! I personally like Rachel/Finn a lot, but this oneshot was great! I can imagine this happening to Kurt. Poor guy. And I think you portrayed Finn very well. I can't imagine him going ballistic on Kurt like someone else might.
Great oneshot, Symone. I hope you write more Glee oneshots. (or stories) :D
~Lidia |
 Char-chan 2009-10-01 . chapter 1aww that was simply adorable! alas~ poor onesided love <3 hope to see more ;) |
 eideticMeMoRy22 2009-10-01 . chapter 1i loved it!! |
 TheBucketWoman 2009-10-01 . chapter 1Finn was much cooler about it than I expected him to be. And Kurt was much gutsier. I wouldn't call this OOC tho. These qualities are in them. It just seems like it will take a teeny bit longer for them to come out in canon.
Seeing their potential here makes me happy.
Though overall, the fic made my heart hurt.
Can't wait to see what you come up with next. |