An excellent concept for a story and capably written. Enjoyable throughout.

To it's slight detrement...it hits a few spots of almost cringe-inducing mush...which isn't to say that mush is bad, but the extent of it...just don't go overboard.

If you're a fan of shooters at all, I would LOVE to see an Ikaruga story from you...

Wow... I love the game and that was by far the best thing I've ever read in my life. If you tried, you could write a book. Write more of these

there is nothing better for a good battle game than a good intro story and let me tell you, ma'friend, this is an excellent one for an excellent game, kepp on writing

WOW that was full of detail I loved it. keep writing you deserve more reviews if not better ones like this one. A

One word: Wow. I love stories that are drmatic

Very nice. Very moving and original. Nice job!