I have been loving all of your stories, they are really amazing!

Good story so far. Thanks for sharing!

please update n soon..love it!

So far so good! I am loving this story as much as the previous ones. I re-read the others for kicks before I started this one. Thank you for sharing your hard work with us!

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Great chapter! keep it up!

This whole story is so DAMN AWESOME!! I absolutely LOVE it! :D I hope you'll have more chapters up soon! ^^

great chapter :) cant wait to see what happes next ...

Great chapter. Can't wait for the next installment. This is one of the best though out and written stories that I have read in a long time.

Great chapter. The game was fun.

I just finished reading the updates for your Unknown Relations stories, and like with your Midnight Guardian stories I have really enjoyed this very much, thanks for writing it. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more.

SeaBreeze :-)

I love this. :) I wasn't all that certain in the beginning of the series, but with all the Sirius/ Remus parenting and the VERY funny Potter awkwardness it completely made my day.

I love how you're incorporating pieces of the real story with your own and adding a lot of new great parts. I'm really interested to see how you'll wing the Tournament (Hayden or Orion??!HAHA)and eventually if you make it to Book 5 (Voldie's thoughts, visions and such). Will they ever figure out that he's really the savior (HAHA take that Dumblydor ;P)

I hope you update soon. I'll be waiting ;)

:) This story makes me happy. Please update soon! :)

Great chapter!!~!!~!! I love Lynch (is that right?) learning from his mistake in the challenge. That was a nice change.
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"He could only imagine the trouble so many would have caused when the music had stopped and fought the urge to ask Remus if he had been enthralled…Orion shuddered. There were just some things no one should wonder about their Uncle."

HAHAHA so very true


"When Hermione pulled away, Orion shared a knowing look with Neville before answering. “Hermione, your confidence in me is overwhelming, really.”

“You still could have told us, mate,” Ron said as he lightly punched Orion in the shoulder. “How do you know Krum?”

Orion shrugged his shoulders. “We've known each other for years,” he said nonchalantly.

Ron stared at Orion dumbfounded. “Viktor Krum?” he squeaked."

*snerk* Hermione will of course always think the worse.

Ron is such a fanboy :P


I liked the differences from the book you had here :)

This whole series is fantastic-you're brilliant at characterisation, without becoming too mushy. I can't find a fault with it. James seems a more pitiable character than expected from the book though, but that's probably because of everyone making him and Lily out to be saints.

Love it-update soon please!