|Reviews for Unknown Relations: The Goblet of Fire|
| Impressionist 7/8/12 . chapter 24
Great. The Potters are screwed. The son they neglected is the real BWL.
| Shaggy37 7/8/12 . chapter 24
Outstanding chapter! Hermione forgot to give Rita to Sirius!
| SWaddict1986 7/8/12 . chapter 24
“"I know you want to sleep but don't you want to be healed for when Padfoot comes?" Moony countered.”
heh, good point.
“"I didn't keep the connection long enough for that to happen," Orion said quickly. "The Aurors had already arrived and…I just wanted to get out of there."”
It would have been interesting to see what you’d come up with for that. But I don’t blame him (nor you) for stopping.
“"The Potters deserve some answers, Sirius. I would think you would understand better than anyone."”
*shrugs* I agree with Dumbledore here. ESPECIALLY since Voldy does know now.
“"I'm staying," Aunt Alice said stubbornly. "I'm Orion's godmother, Sirius. I am also one of the few who was by your side from the start. If this doesn't go well, you will need me to put the Potters in their place."”
Hahahahaha Oh man, that is perfect. I always thought of Neville’s mother being a bit more mm…demanding ;)
Mrs. Potter was on her feet. "No!" she exclaimed. "You swore it was Hayden! You gave us your word—"”
Oh my gosh! Oh my goodness! So they kept the one who was “stronger” just because they thought he was the one who survived?
“"—who? You?" Hayden interrupted, jumping to his feet. "You weren't protecting me, Rose or even Har—Orion! I asked you so many times why I could see through Orion's eyes! I begged for answers and you—you lied!"
"We didn't lie, Hayden," Mr. Potter said firmly.”
At this point, the omission of info THAT big is so close to lying that it might as well be called that.
“The Ministry would jump at the chance to have the-boy-who-lived in their pocket assuring the public that everything was under control. The truth was that all control had gone out the window.”
That’s for damn sure.
“He had never considered that the answers he had so desperately wanted would be ones that he would never want to hear.”
It happens all too often :
And even worse, it’s too late to unheard them now.
“Orion grinned weakly. It was nice to think that even with all of the changes that would undoubtedly come, the main constant in his life would remain the same.”
And it’s a good constant, too!
“ However, instead of being angry or bitter, Sirius had taken the challenge and had been (in Orion's opinion) the best Dad ever.”
“Why Orion Black? What was so special about him?”
*sigh* Schools and their students
“Seeing Professor Snape on the opposite side of the table, Orion coud only hope he wouldn't meet the same fate. Granted, Professor Snape wasn't Orion's favorite person but had always he helped when needed.”
I love that. Okay, maybe love is a bit strong of a word, but I like that a lot.
“That look normally meant Hayden was going to do something stupid and no one would be able to talk him out of it.”
Ah-hahahahaha. Mm, at least he didn’t- not in the Great Hall anyway.
“Viktor, Orion realized kept glancing his way as if he wanted nothing more than to join Orion at the Gryffindor table.”
Yeah, doesn’t surprise me at all. I love Viktor.
It wouldn’t even surprise me if he walked over there to begin with.
“Viktor let out a snort. "That man is a covard," he said in a gruff voice. "I'm just glad he took that vay out instead of rejoining the Dark Lord," he eyes shifted to Orion, "othervise I vould have killed him."”
3 What an awesome friend. Cedric too :D
“It wasn't long before they were joined by Hayen,”
Just letting you know you forgot the ‘d’ in his name.
YES! RITA TO BE ARRESTED, THAT’S GREAT!
“ This train ride symbolized the end of normal. Normal was now a dream that could never be obtained until Voldemort was gone for good.”
:( I hate that he’s thinking that way. Even worse, I hate that it’s true.
“I want to be your brother, Ori, if you'll let me."
"And I want to be your sister," Rose added”
And he will let them do just that, I know it. But I also know that he won’t accept the Potters, and that Hayden & Rose will back him with that decision.
Great end! I’ll keep an eye out for the next story.
*Double-checks author alerts*
| Wolfric 7/8/12 . chapter 24
Good chapter. Thanks for writing. W.
| jeah 7/8/12 . chapter 24
I found Unknown Relations I today. Just my luck, I saw that you finished Goblet of Fire yesterday. Hooray! I'm looking forward to reading all 4. :)
| MAHA1959 7/8/12 . chapter 24
and a new year ended. and the truth is revealed to the Potter's. and Orion is not happy to be the new target of Voldy !
and now what'll happen during hollidays and next year ?
I'm eager to read you soon...
good night ... from France
| Furionknight 7/8/12 . chapter 24
I look forward to more :)
| jbcna 7/8/12 . chapter 24
loved it great ending cant wait for more!
| Marinelife37 7/8/12 . chapter 24
Great chapter. I really love this series. I don't see how the secret behind Orion's adoption will remain secret for much longer. I hope the things with the Potter Family straighten out our the course of the rest of the series. I can't wait to find out who gave Harry the adoption potion to create Orion.
| Guest 7/8/12 . chapter 24
Your story made me sad.
Your story made me smile.
Your story mafe me laugh and it was definitely worth while.
The Crimson Mage.
| Lilween 7/8/12 . chapter 24
I absolutely love these stories!
| SeaBreeze2Ga 7/8/12 . chapter 24
Great chapter, and great ending to this part, can't wait to read more and to see what happens starting the next year, keep up the great work, can't wait to read more.
| FairAris 7/8/12 . chapter 24
Great story and excellent wrap-up! I thought the way Orion handled the Potters was very understandable. Dumbledore seems to have said less at the leaving feast about Orion's involvement than Orion thought he would.
Thank you for updating. If it isn't too much trouble, when you post the first chapter of the next story would you add a chapter to this one notifying people?
| tumshie 7/8/12 . chapter 24
A really good ending to your wonderful story, thank you so much for writing
p.s. the winged horses are Thestrals, not Threstles
| Nightlover2 7/8/12 . chapter 24