that was GREAT! i know exactly how Rosalie feels, because some girls who are supposed to be my friends ALWAYS oogle my boyfriend! some girls who are just flirty bitches do too! one time, a girl asked my boyfriend if he thought she was pretty on facebook. i mean...THAT IS SO STUPID! ok end of my rant. the point is i don't like girls who think it's ok to just flirt with anyone, no matter if they have a bf or not!

OK, so everyone see's her acting this way towards Emmett, but Bella was she that blinded. Man that girl is lucky Rosalie didn't rip her a new Ahole. At least she got in one good :-)

haha i hate rosalie im glad she haad to deal with this once. not just bella.. edward got an erection over rosalie that just killed my buzz but watever. jocelyns cute

K!

This was so sweet. I really liked the relationships between Rose and Em and the kids! I enjoyed seeing how they related to each other.

It was awesome when Rose gave it to Lauren in the end!

Can't to read more of your stuff!

Forever yours, Liz

Aw this story was awesome. The best I've read in a long time. I'm so happy Rose got to hit Lauren-she really needed a wake up call. And Jocelyn is such a cutie XD

10/10

aww, adorable. go rose!

ah! that was very good! well done! Jocelyn was cute!

Liz

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loved it!

I looved it!

really cool and sweet!

I totally hate Lauren

wow Lauren has some nerve doing that at a child's birthday party... hmm no wonder she just got dumped.

lol the guys and the Xbox.

how old is Anthony? The same like Jocelyn?

Lovely story and an interesting set up. I was actually waiting to see Rosalie make Emmett "pay" for his near misstep.

Ladies.. I really enjoyed this one-shot. Well-Done! Good luck with the contest!

I loved it! I love Rosalie and Emmett fics and would love for this one to become a full story of course. I loved how Emmett was a caring father and yet still a passionate and loving husband. Rose and Em are my favorite couple! Great job...but I will say I was annoyed with Bella for bringing an uninvited guest who obviously was a troublemaker...gr Bella!

great one shot:D

OMG i love it :D very cute and sweet and my favourite story :D ;D