 James Birdsong 8/13/07 . chapter 2 Wonderful |
 James Birdsong 8/13/07 . chapter 1 Yes very awesome. |
 Ikusawa 6/8/07 . chapter 2that was a great story.. i'm always waiting for the next chapter.. altough that was 5 years ago.. |
 asylem29 10/16/06 . chapter 2oh...
you're good! |
 eskimo 7/6/05 . chapter 2 wow that was so cute and nice plz continue |
 dins 7/10/04 . chapter 2Wow...that was beautiful...can't wait for the next chapter, this fanfic is one of the best ones I've read so far. |
 czee 5/10/04 . chapter 2Wow... this is so well-written. I love it! :D I can't wait to read your following chpaters. Keep it up! :D |
 kawaiisakurame 4/20/03 . chapter 1 oh yeah! you totally rock! hope you finish chapter 3, CANT WAIT! keep up the beautiful and poetic touches! _ |
 Allyssa 4/7/03 . chapter 2 I'm very eager to know what will happened next. I've read this a million times hoping it would get continued. Why don't you? Maybe it got erased but mabye you can make another one. Shun and Ruriko is a very cuthe couple! |
 Chibi Tsuki 11/2/02 . chapter 2Cute ficcie, I hope you'll continue with it. |
 Sophie613 3/30/02 . chapter 2 This fanfiction is just FANTASTIC! I will be waiting for more of your wonderful written fanfitctions. |
 Spiffy 3/29/02 . chapter 2 AWWWWW... So sweet! |
 psychedelic aya 2/23/02 . chapter 2please continue! Hurry! WAH! I love dis fic! |
 Nicole 2/19/02 . chapter 2 The suspense is killing me! |
 touyatouya 1/18/02 . chapter 2That was well done _ It seems you thought out the ramifications of a ten year absence fairly well - it makes sense that Kaoru would strive to fill Ruri's absence, and Ukiya watching out for her reactions to Ruri's return was a nice touch. The scenes were well written, adequately descriptive and with a fair vocabulary - there were just a couple of words here and there which seemed out of place. (Contact me if you want me to nit - pick them for you.) All in all, a nicely done story. Keep it up :) |