Wonderful

Yes very awesome.

that was a great story.. i'm always waiting for the next chapter.. altough that was 5 years ago.. ^^

oh...

you're good!

wow that was so cute and nice plz continue

Wow...that was beautiful...can't wait for the next chapter, this fanfic is one of the best ones I've read so far.

Wow... this is so well-written. I love it! :D I can't wait to read your following chpaters. Keep it up! :D

oh yeah! you totally rock! hope you finish chapter 3, CANT WAIT! keep up the beautiful and poetic touches! ^_^

I'm very eager to know what will happened next. I've read this a million times hoping it would get continued. Why don't you? Maybe it got erased but mabye you can make another one. Shun and Ruriko is a very cuthe couple!

Cute ficcie, I hope you'll continue with it.

This fanfiction is just FANTASTIC! I will be waiting for more of your wonderful written fanfitctions.

AWWWWW.... So sweet!!

please continue!!! Hurry!!! WAH! I love dis fic!!!

The suspense is killing me!

That was well done ^_^ It seems you thought out the ramifications of a ten year absence fairly well - it makes sense that Kaoru would strive to fill Ruri's absence, and Ukiya watching out for her reactions to Ruri's return was a nice touch. The scenes were well written, adequately descriptive and with a fair vocabulary - there were just a couple of words here and there which seemed out of place. (Contact me if you want me to nit - pick them for you.) All in all, a nicely done story. Keep it up :)