This was great, I liked it.:)

SQUEALING AGAIN! what is wrong with me today! I NEVER EVER EVER SQUEAL! Much less tell people about it!

-Laura(Emily Windsnap, Percy Jackson, and Maximum Ride fanatic)

I love puppies!

This is lovely!

Just on thing... maybe we could have a little more decription of Aaron? He sounds very dreamy, but waht is is hair colour, for instance?

But over all, very lovely!

hiya babe! aww this was so cute! I always knew they should have something like this in the actual series, so i was really golad you did this! yay! ) i'm also excited to read your' outsiders story! Be sure to check out Chapter 6 of my story (i'll tell you when it's up, no worries) great job, and keep writing! you have realy talent, and you should share it. Great, fantastic job.

3 kait

OMG! luv it! could use a little less-cheesyness, tjough..:D