It's amazing how much I like Luvia given that she hasn't really appeared much in the official FSN material, granted I know who she is, but it still amazes me.

Anyways, love what you've done with the chapter. You've certainly portrayed a solid character with her whole noble personality down. It's kinda what I expected her to be. I'm curious how this will turn out. I suspect that Luvia came to Japan because of Rin, but I'm more interested in how you're gonna build something between Shirou and Luvia within a short time frame.

wow, You really got personalities down, yeah, what I missed from stay night and ataraxia were the character developments yeah? Oh and also the humor, definitely. Hope you give us the honors of reading more of o fic soon!

I don't write myself, although I intend to dabble in writing eventually. I gotta say though mate, your work's are very, very entertaining. Especially the Fate/Stay Night one's, (My favorite series of all time, if you havent played the visual novel, do so!)

You've presented the vanilla characters extremely well. And the newly introduced character Luviagelita quirks my interest (I have a hunch she's connected to Sakura/Rider somehow)

The interactions between Shirou and each individual girl is especially nice, you could even make either whole seperate chapter or draw another chapter out by going through his experiences that you mention. Such as Shirou's "Magic Study Courses" with Tohsaka. Possibly even going throwing in more sexual tension with Saber perhaps needing a recharge, and Shirou just not finding the privacy to do so!

THat was damn awesome, good work

moar girls for Shirou !

I like your Rider

Another excellent chapter and a surprising one at that. Didnt expect you to use Luvia. I not a big fan of hers because i dont now her character that well, but I did like her in the chapter.

Out of all the characters so far I am liking your version of Rider the most. Instead of the cool, calculating, over protective, and bad lucked servant from FSN, we have a calculating, cunning, mischievous, joking, almost starker Rider. That stands out from the rest.

Keep up the good work

looking forward to more more of the same

Merry Christmas

Great chapter, poor Shirou the women in his life keep making his existence harder soon he will want to take Archer place in the counter guard to escape of them, the next girl Luvia is an interesting choice to continue this fic i´ll never thought you´ll choose her next, i was expecting Rin not her rival or Sakura even Caster before her, i´m waiting for the next chapter to see what want the rich heir of a magus family with Shirou, later.

As usual your brand of fanfiction pulls me in from the get go and doesn`t let me leave until I`ve read the entire thing from top to bottom even ignoring my canine who`s diligently waiting for her walk I promised her ten minutes ago. Thank you again and keep up the good work yah!

Yay an update! It's good to see Luvia in action :)

Great chapter. I've only seen Luvia from Unlimited Codes so I don't know much about her. Did she debut in Atrexia? I never played that one, still waiting for it to be translated if it is. Well I hope you update again soon cause Ill be waitin.

Okay, this was pretty damn awesome. Excellent job Traingham and thanks for the update.

I seen an dojinshi a lot like this chapter, but I don't remember where...

pretty awesome .. MOAR !

Dark Saber ne? She's certainly a bit different to use than most other series. I gotta say it caught my attention and I hope you update again soon!

very nice

something different and very enjoyable