love it..love it...love it...

you can't stop here...wanna read more...

worms

Please update this fic, we need to know what goes on next, Please break the suspense is killing me here.

Sketch1981

hehehe, this is great!

'Kay, I'm a teeny bit confused, but maybe that'll be cleared up as I read further.

THAT'S ME ?

HEY! I'm not in here?

I am amazed at how many positive reviews these "New A-Team" stories get. Script format rarely works and it doesn't work here. The "New A-Team" are a bunch of cutesy teenagers with painful to read dialogue. They bear little relation to the characters in the show and the brief appearances by Face and Murdock don't help. The "humor" (I use that term loosely) falls pretty flat.

You're driving me CRAZY! Please finish this soon!

LOL! S.O.A.! you guys should do that for real, just maybe not in a giant box, lol. that is very cool. well, i can't wait for the next chapter!

You are such a tease! In a good way, of course. You always feed just enough to keep me happy, yet you still leave enough unanswered for me to yell, "WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?" Write faster, darn you! Jk! I understand the writer's block problem all too well. I swear I'm working on Chapt. 3 of "Tangled Web"! Keep it coming! :)

Ooooooo, you SOOOOOOOO gottat finish this story! Puh-lease, please, please, please!

You are AWESOME!

Those things the UPS guys use to lift heavy objects are called dollies. They're fun to wheel people around on (even if they're not in boxes)! If I were in Lindsey's place, I'd be just a teensy bit paranoid. UPS guys hardly ever come in pairs and usually just leave after getting paperwork signed. But what do I know? I've never lived in California. And the story's good, of course.

LOLOL! i'll be watching for very large packages. :-D can't wait for the next chapter!

Question: What is the team doing in the Northeast? Did they just decide that business is slow so why not drive from one end of the country to the other? OK, that was two questions. But still good never the less. Keep going! :-)

PS: I can understand leaving for CA at 4am if you're flying in an airplane, but not in a VAN. A person can take only so much of the interior of a motor vehicle, including a van. I know; I've spent 26 straight hours in one.