 rweasley500 2009-12-24 . chapter 15It is sad that this story is over, but wow what a wild ride. A great story full of ups and downs. I can't wait til you write another one. |
 blitzholly 2009-12-24 . chapter 15luv it but y did u have 2 end it ='( and will u make another story 2 this story? |
 ElvenMermaid 2009-12-24 . chapter 15Yay!! Happy ending!! :D But that means end of the story!! D: Ah well. But will Cora ever find out about her unborn child? Judging from her visions, I'm guessing it was going to be a boy. I wonder if it would have any mer-qualities... |
 uchenna t again! 2009-12-23 . chapter 15 omg i havnt been on here in 4ever but so happy to see that u just finished this!!1! i still dont have an account lol one day maybe. omg i still love it realy exciting an the last few chapters were incredable! i freaked out when lewis got shot. so sad a/b the baby tho. so emma decided not to tell wow :\ i guess for the best but happy about denman emmas right good riddance lol r u gonna write more h2o stories?? i hope so! awesome fic! |
 Nylrac 2009-12-22 . chapter 15 Woohoo! I LOVED it! So much SUSPENCE!! But what about Emmas secret? Wouldn't she tell Cora? Or maybe I missed that part...? Ok, no blunt offence intended, but I have no interest in reading a story about a tv show I don't even watch, even if it is H2O related, so I say, more from you, nay of the Sister Secrets or whatever. |
 Paradox Tremors 2009-12-22 . chapter 15OhmyGod, I can’t believe this is over. I always feel like that when I have read a really great story. Fantastic. Love your writing. You’ve finally made me happy about killing off that little b-i-t-c-h. I hated her and the pain she caused the girls and Lewis. But it is sad to know there is a lost that only Emma will know about—I hope she can bear her cross; but I still think she made the right decision. Love the story. Love Cora! |
 rweasley500 2009-12-20 . chapter 14A very solemn chapter. Very well written and I can feel all the emotion. I suspected she might be pregnant. The heightning of her power, a few of her mannerisms. I also suspected that they had no idea. Once again a great chapter. I can't wait until the next one. |
 blitzholly 2009-12-20 . chapter 14luv it can't wait 4 the next 1 |
 ElvenMermaid 2009-12-19 . chapter 14When I saw the warning I almost started hyperventilating because I misread it and thought it was ending instead of themes. And I have a question as to her miscarriage. Was she... *blush* raped *blush* when she was captured? And by the end I WAS hyperventilating. No no no I don't want Cora to die!! D: |
 WALIXELA 2009-12-19 . chapter 14good chapter really sad about cora update soon please |
 Paradox Tremors 2009-12-18 . chapter 14Man, I’m actually shaking after reading this. I can’t believe she miscarried; and I agree with Emma, if the truth was told, it might kill both Lewis and Cora—literally. Some things are best kept secretive at any price. Emma is the kind of friend I need. Someday I’ll find that friend. Dr Denman better pray she’s dead, if not; I’ll write a story and kill her off myself. To say I hate that woman would be the understatement of the year—I HATE that witch with a passion.
A great chapter my friend. So much emotions, it drained me from reading it. Please have Cora be okay. I can’t wait to read the next chapter and find out what Lewis has in mind. |
 WALIXELA 2009-12-03 . chapter 13good chapter but sad i hope cora will be alright and what happened to Demman |
 ElvenMermaid 2009-12-02 . chapter 13No no no no no!! I can see where this is going to go!! Cora's gonna die!! D: why must the good die young?!?! D: |
 blitzholly 2009-12-02 . chapter 13luv it can't wait 4 the next 1 |
 Nylrac 2009-12-02 . chapter 13 But wait, wouldn't the doctors need to use water on Cora's wound to clean it out? What happens if Cora goes mermaid in a hospital?! Dun dun DUN |