You've got an interesting story going on here though I feel that Sora's reaction to Rai's death was lacking and your discriptive writing could use some "fleshing out" it's still a pretty good story otherwise. I look forward to find out what happens next!

Omg u need to finish this!

Omg u need to finish this!

Please, revive this fic! It's funny, awesome, and it brings back memories to when I watched (and re-watched) this fantastic anime!

interesting, i can't wait for more. please update and good luck thanks again until the next chapter.

ps: thank you for updating and making the chapter long, i like long chapters.

You must keep writing! I'm getting addicted to this story! C'mon! Keep writing!

Chapter 2 is good as well. I suggest you keep writing .Angel! )

Wow, I don't even remember if I've heard of the main story but this first capter is really good! ) I suggest you keep writing and I'll keep reading!

fantastic and amusing please update and thanks again until next timen have a nice day.

ps: i can't wait for the next chapter.

Great chappie! Please continue!

finally... this chapter was worth the wait though

its been long. glad you updated.

Very well written, love all the arguing, keep it up. :)

With that said, Sayonara!

that was awesome! lol i love the tickling part -

wow that was good