 glitteredvixen06 2009-10-22 . chapter 2Sorry I'm a little late with the review, but I am here ^_^
I think you just set a record for 'how many times can you use the word '**' in one sentence'. LOL. Especially in the first line of the flashback section, excellent :)
It's fascinating to see Rei as the killer though. Never seen him put in that angle before. I am most certainly excited to how the rest of this story will pan out.
Update when you can,
Later,
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 glitteredvixen06 2009-10-04 . chapter 1As promised, here is my more in-depth review.
You know, I admire your work. Always happy to see other fellow authors/friends write gory fics. Not too many on here nowadays, and it's extremely hard to find. So yes, I am happy with this.
Now... are Bryan and Rei good friends? Or are they part of some group or something? Not that I mind or anything... I'm happy to see them together. Why did Rei kill Raul? Nice kill there Rei, excellent job, lol.
Definitely looking forward to reading the next chapter!
Later,
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