- “No, this,” Jared pointed to his steaming mug. “This thing right here? This is tea. Tea is a type of drink, not a meal. And now we are eating dinner because it’s night time. Dinner is not lunch. There are three set meals in a day: breakfast, lunch and dinner. Why do you people make things so complicated?” Jared usually got agitated about these sorts of things. -

This made me laugh so freakin' hard. OMG. Seriously <3 <3

I love that Noel has two different colored eyes, I love all the boys interactions. I just flat out love this story. Eagerly awaiting more.

I love you. This story is awesome, I love you for writing and sharing it with us~ OMG the witty banters, the cute characterization, the awesome build-up, the promise of a new enemy, they're all great! Looking forward to your next update! :D

I'm not really good at writing reviews, but since you stated that you want opinions, I will do my best since this is my favorite SM story right now.

I really like the banter that is going on between all of the guys - and of the girls!
I like how you focus on the dialogue - and how spot on it is. Personally, I find Dialogue one of the hardest things to write, so good dialogue always impresses me. And how you mangage to be witty all the way through! I laughed out loud several times as I read this.
I like how Minas and Reis discussion goes from gentle to happy to some rather mean teasing - showing how close they are, showing their personalities very well.

I love the cultural references. I love the name Ceithin (allthough I'm not sure of the pronounciation), I love the teacups, I love that Jadeite is american and Kunzite Welsh and I like how you view the personalities of all of them.

Haha, my first reaction when Ceithin ordred food was 'Ew, british cooking, poor them! Poor Mamoru living with them! Good thing they have Makoto'

I do think the short paragraf in the middle seems a bit odd. It's to short to catch you and since it's so different from the feel in the rest of this story, it made me lose my rythm a bit. I do believe that it could be written to fit more to the story - a longer paragraf, that catches you more perhaps? Or written in with other happenings?

Except this, I love your story. I really want this to become the modern-timeline-shitennou-ultimate-epic that I think you could make it.

E I LOVE it! I can already tell that this is going to be ten kinds of awesome. Already loving the boys and all of their boy hijinks and their NAMES and their nationalities. E Welsh!Kunzite!

The man-date had me in stitches every single time they mentioned it. Oh bromance, you are such a wonderful thing.

I vaguely remember you asking whether we would be "okay" with you setting a fic in the UK, and now I can tell you that it is SO DARNED AWESOME to read a fic in this setting. I also am glad that Mamoru is so out of his element that they have to explain lots of cultural details to him, because it helps me keep up with all the references.

Can't wait to see where this goes!

I love it. They're real college students. They drink, they skiv off homework, and they curse like they invented it. I feel like I'm reading my Monday night, except with more men.

Anyway, that being said, your characters and your dialogue are your strength.In two chapters, you've fleshed them out and made them likable. The plot is catching up, but this is a great exposition. I'm really enjoying it, so I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Cheers..

OMG Charlie, I can't tell you how much I LOVE this!! So, I'm just going to blabber like an incoherent idiot, because, really, that's all I'm capable of doing at the moment. You totally just made my day with this update!!

I LOVE all the bantering that goes on between the guys. It's hilarious, and I can just see it all go down! It's like you've transported me right in the middle of the scene. I just love bantering, and yours was absolutely fantastic!! I can't tell you how many times I laughed out loud. Thankfully, no one was around to witness my intermittent bursts of laughter.

And then the scene with Mina and Rei--again, LOVED it! I like the parallel between Kaidou and Ace, the texting, everything! Ceithin needs to mend her heart, stat! The whole mushroom thing cracked me up, the Zach-picked cups, and did I already mention the bantering?! Oh, and you've got everyone's character down! :)

And, since you wanted some concrit ... The only tiny thing that didn't work as well for me? The little bit in the middle with the creeper. While it made me go "oh plot deepens," it didn't quite fit with the rest of the piece. It just felt a little out of place / came out of nowhere--I think it would do better elsewhere. Otherwise, it was a very well written bit that's an interesting twist!

Some cultural aspects that I wouldn't mind learning more about when you've got a free moment. Pub quizzes and the chapter title. And for fear of sounding like an ignorant American (too late!), I will leave it at that for now. :)

Again, FREAKIN' PHENOMENAL JOB charlie!! You better update soon, or I'm going to pester the living daylights out of you!

k I left a review on your LJ, but I'll leave one here too just so you know how much I love this ^_^. I really can't wait for more.

I thought about trying to coherently explain what I love about this fic, but I can't; Jared's verbal spewing, Zach's chick drawing ass-pants, shirtless ninja Ceithin, Noel with two eye colors (zOMG DAVID BOWIE!) I cannot express the love I have.

You have *wonderful* characterization for the girls and guys; plus it was hysterically funny, and *extremely* well written.

Love, love, love! Can't wait for an update!!

I am absolutely in love with the characterization of both the guys and girls. The relationship are fun to watch. I already can't wait for a meeting between them.

amazing. update soon please

Hahaha, this was fun xD

wow. am glad that mamoru met new people and i have to admit that i really like your story. its funny and cute. i cant wait for the girls to meet the guys. though it sucks that something evil in stirring already. i do ghope that the guys and the girls dont have to go throuh the same things like they did during the silver millenium. p.s cant wait for the next update and i really like the fact that the chapters are long. kudos for you.

LOVE the story its so funny! i cant wait to read more i love minako so please write a bit about her. also im guessing Ceithin is kunzite? its such an interesting name. the parts about the bromance and man dates lol. really funny i really hope you continue this story its fantastic

What a wonderful beginning. I love that the attempt to attend Havard was refered to as an epic fail. I can't wait to read more.