i am loving it but longer sex would have been fun

Really nice. The Arizona Memorial is awesome to visit. You can feel the spirits of all those who died. There is a very solemn and reverent atmosphere. And they got their honeymoon baby. Charlie was a perfect name for him.

hi there! i cant get enough of your story! when is the next chapter coming out? hahahaa.. i'll be waiting and wanting more!

that was hot little mama!

You've made them HUMAN

We've discussed this before, but one satisfying love scene is enough in any romance novel and this one was perfect. Not over the top or cheesy. It fit with their character and the sweet plotline.

Great job, sweets!

Oh, that wasn't smutty at all! In fact, it was incredibly sweet. Great sex is about emotion anyway, not the physicality of it. I think if more people waited they'd realize how great the payoff is.

Thanks again for a wonderful story! I'm hoping I have time to read your others, but my doctor cleared me to go back to work next week, and tomorrow will be spent preparing for my parents 50th wedding anniversary party on Saturday, so it remains to be seen if I can squeeze it in.

Very sweet! A bit of a shocker that is is 30 something and only slept with one person!

Even your smutty one shots make me go all girly and teary eyed.

i really liked it, and the ending was perfect, specially if that's the end.

3 ya'll

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Thats so sweet.

Darn gravity! (thanks for the real moment). This was a sweet and fitting honeymoon for B/E! Glad they waited!

Very poetic. I felt her shivers as if they were my own. Would this to be read at a poetry night, I would be in the throws of ecstasy...because of all the libidinous passion. Well versed my friend, well versed. I adore the words snaked and ghosted

Great honeymoon! I love that they were both in the same place with their past experience.

Absolutely fantastic! Well worth the sexual tension from those two! Hawaii best ever! Thanks for sharing!