 My-Friend-KITT 2009-10-05 . chapter 4Wow!
Very Nice!
Sorry I didn't read sooner...
Just came across it!
Very Very Good! |
 quiltingdiva 2009-10-05 . chapter 2Wow!
This was really difficult to read. Having Lois wait for rescue, and be let down.
And the plane crash. I thought you might be referring to 911. That was really painful.
All the consequences of not telling anyone. It was childish, stupid even, just not malicious.
Sigh. Reality is,so often neglect is the worst crime of all. And I do love Clark!
He just comes to his conclusions from such a different angle than the rest of us.
It's almost as if he's been raised in this little box, and doesn't realize that every action has a
reaction.
Anyway, as many times as I've read about the lost five years, yours was gritty, painful and very
real. Thanks, It was great! |
 bella 2009-10-04 . chapter 4 aww! What an awesome ending! I really enjoy all of your fics and THANK YOU for continuing to write SR fic because it seems to be a dying fandom! We need more ficage and yet more ficage! |
 bella 2009-10-04 . chapter 3 I absolutely adore the way you get into Lois' head. It just makes so much... sense. Another fantastic chapter! |
 bella 2009-10-04 . chapter 2 lovely ficcie!! I love seeing the 'history' through Lois' eyes |
 acacia59601 2009-10-04 . chapter 4Great chapter and great story! Sorry I didn't review the other chapters, I got behind... Very well done! |
 JamesTKent 2009-10-04 . chapter 4Very nice turnaround, and a good beginning for the next phase of their relationship. Well done.
One minor quibble from the compulsive editor in me: "lightning" doesn't have an "e" in it, and it should be "losing" not "loosing". Sorry. |
 JamesTKent 2009-10-02 . chapter 2Nicely done, but I hope you go somewhere new with it; people have re-hashed this part of the tale to death. I -do- like the way you're handling the emotions, though. |
 Shado Librarian 2009-10-02 . chapter 2A very nice take on Clark's return. |