 Lucrecia LeVrai 12/2/05 . chapter 1I liked it. Nice writing style, decent interpretation and characterization. :] |
 anon 2/20/05 . chapter 1 There's so little good stuff about Seymour out here, so this really brightened my night...in a wonderful, angsty, bittersweet way. Good work! |
 klepto-maniac0 3/19/04 . chapter 1See, I knew I'd find some gems if I'd looked in the very back of this section! Good work! |
 Matt1plus1 1/16/03 . chapter 1Wow, nicely written fic! I'm adding it to my favorite's list. It gives a nice, deeper glance into Seymour's character.
And by the way, thank you for all the reviews you give my stories. I really love your critiques because you point out the weak spots in my work and give me advice to make it better. Thank you. :) |
 Anon 10/21/02 . chapter 1 Great emotive writing. I thought the aeon selection process worked differently but that shouldn't really matter since it was pretty vague anyway. Not a big Seymour fan, but this kept me reading, which in itself says a lot about how magnetic the prose was. |
 Lulu 3/3/02 . chapter 1 Wow! Seymour is defiently the best Squaresoft character ever, and with this story you can see how Seymour's mom might have felt about the whole thing, nice work. |
 Krylancelo 1/19/02 . chapter 1Intresting |
 Cloudandhispain 1/14/02 . chapter 1 Frag one dinosaur |
 keem 1/13/02 . chapter 1THANK YOU! there isn't very many good seymour-oriented stories... but this is definitely a good one ;) great job! |
 The Maiden Amorisa 1/13/02 . chapter 1That was really touching, I love Seymour, I dont blame him for wanting that power, that was really great...) good job |
 Cyridia 1/13/02 . chapter 1 Wow. This is...wow. I almost started crying when I read this! Very, VERY good story. |
 Shinnite 1/12/02 . chapter 1wow - really nice. _ I don't really like Seymour that much, but this was a very touching piece!
I look forward to reading some other FFX works from you. |