 Lydia-hime 2009-12-10 . chapter 4Very nice story! It took me a while to get around to reading it though... sadly... Hehe... The interaction between Sasuke and Sakura always seems to catch me off guard in a way, but after reading this, I feel like I've warmed up to it. Congratulations on finishing this! |
 ScarletCamellia 2009-12-04 . chapter 4AWESOMENESS. Ahahahaha Hana knows EXACTLY how to torment and humiliate Itachi, locking the poor man to his bed and getting him all hot and bothered while on the phone with this little brother.
I'm still sad Shisui died, though I REALLY REALLY REALLY like the kinda-cliffhanger ending ^_^ It's very cute, and it sort of seems like the dog helped Itachi rehabilitate, which is VERY cute.
Love it, and can't believe I forgot to review it! Sorry for the lateness! |
 hypheniated 2009-11-03 . chapter 4hahahahah, go Sasuke!
I love Deidara's random appearance.
Hah, Hana. That was good. Made him think a little more.
That was really good, Erika. I don't think I've actually seen a story like this one before. :D |
 hypheniated 2009-11-03 . chapter 3didn't know you needed a touriuqent for shooting up. most people i know don't bother.
Itachi is so idiotic. Next time, get fat or grow hair or something. XD
Poor Hana...
Stupid Hidan! |
 hypheniated 2009-11-03 . chapter 2stupid Sasuke. XD
hahah, I love that Shisui's a flirt.
wow...Itachi and Hana are so...kinky!
but no! Shisui can't die! :( |
 Cheese Maiden 2009-10-23 . chapter 4I came back from my vacation, and the story is finished. It's nice that Kiba and Sasuke are helping out their siblings. Itachi going to withdrawal was very painful and it must of hurt the people who love him to see him like that. I'm very happy that Itachi and Hana are trying to work it out. |
 Dictionary Ink 2009-10-22 . chapter 4EPIC SARA REVIEW IN...
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YAY. I FINALLY have time to read this! FI-NA-LLY. Seriously, you have no idea how much better this is making my day...
PEP RALLIES ARE RETARDED (I had to help set up the one we're having tomorrow, TODAY. RE-TAR-DED. RAWR.)
And grade tens are the bane of my FUCKING EXISTENCE.
X3 Awwes, I love Kiba.
He's just... SHO KYOOT.
YAY, RANDOM BITS OF SASUSAKU. I think my fix needs to be replenished... Or maybe I just have to go write some Burning Yesterday...
Hm, we shall see...
Dessie has TOTALLY influenced you. Master of Puppets? Really?
O_O
Sasu-cakes... is scary.
Like, ACTUALLY. He's a total freak when he's out of his mind with anger/worry/pissiness/wussyness.
Because to me, he will always be a wuss. XD
SAKURA WIN.
Cigarettes are SO GROSS.
Shut up, I like Ino.
XD Poor Kiba, getting stuck babysitting the withdrawl-ridden Ita-kun... It's funny. XD
OMIGOD, NARUHINA! *flails and dies in happiness because they're JUST SHO KYOOT*
YAY HAWT BOY FIGHT!
O_O SASUSAKU.
And I like how straight-forward Sakura is. Something about it just makes me grin.
And embarrassed!Sasu-cakes is SO GREAT.
And I reallyreallyREALLY love how Sakura and Sasuke are bantering back and forth, and Itachi's just like "...Hana..." and totally not paying attention. It's really random. And very funny.
KARIN SPOUTS PSYCHOLOGY NONSENSE. WIN. WIIN. WII-II-II-II-II-IIN! *does random happy dance*
Oh, Shisui... I love him...
So much...
WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE?!
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I'm having a hard time reading the Hana-telling-Itachi-to-leave scene... It's so sad...
AW, KYOOT PUPPY.
SO KYOOT.
...STOP STEALING MY LINES! The 'condom's cost less then babies' is SO MY LINE!
AND YAY MIKOTO!
I LOVE MIKOTO!
Seriously, I HAVE to write something featuring her. Like, SOON.
...*bawls*
STUPID FUNERALS SUCK.
Especially Shisui's funeral. Like... now I want to cry.
SO.
YOU HAVE YOUR CRAZY EPIC SARA REVIEW.
YES.
Now, I think I may get off the computer, and go work on Burning Yesterday... Because I reallyreallyreally want to get chapter five done! (I've already typed up chapter four, but I REALLY like chapter five! Like, REALLY!)
LOVE.
FOREVER.
ILYILYILYILYSFM.
Seriouslys. :DD |
 Last Butterfly 2009-10-21 . chapter 4*CHEERS* Yaayz! They are finally back together!
Oh man, this was a though one to read. XD At the third chapter I started pulling on my hair - aand I did not let go until the fourth! MAH! ITACHI YOU IDIOT! XD
*cough* But other than that, :D I loved the added SasuSaku~ and Sasuke was great to help his bro' like that.
And *squee* for puppy Yuki! ^_^ |
 hypheniated 2009-10-19 . chapter 1...dear lord. that last line of Itachi's made me laugh. WAFFLES!
i really quite llike this alot. engaging.
I love Hana's crass attitude and Itachi's pomp-ness.
Shisui is always a delight to read. He's always hilarious. |
 Flames Chaos and Wolf 2009-10-19 . chapter 4Dammit, it's over! And it was just getting good! |
 stitch62603 2009-10-19 . chapter 4Great job^^
I loved the ending. It was so sweet. Thank you so much *hugs* |
 LazyNinja 2009-10-19 . chapter 4MASTER! MASTER! Master of Puppets I'm pulling your strings! Twisting your mind and smashing your dreams! Blinded by me you can't see a thing, just call my name 'cause I hear you scream! MASTER! MASTER!
Seriously, second best song in the WORLD. And so fucking ironic, it's not even funny any more.
I can't believe I'm saying this, but I am totally agreeing with Sasuke beating Itachi into a bloody pulp. I mean, dude, seriously. Get a life. You've been there before, and it didn't solve your problems then. What the HELL made you think heroin was going to be the solution this time!? You FAIL, Itachi. FAIL. Metallica fan or not.
Aww, SasuSaku. By the way, MAJOR OOC. Oh well. It suited the moment.
Ouch. Big time. The love of your life, and he doesn't even recognize you when he needs you the most. Itachi deserves a few more hits to the head.
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Alright, Sasuke, I'm sorry about EVERY bad thing I ever said about you. You, my friend, are a true brother of Metal. Metallica: The best band in the world. Ever. Period. I'm glad you don't fail on the music department too. In fact, the music department is one of the most important ones in life, so it makes up for half of your mistakes at least.
Hana, you idiot. Itachi, admitting his love for someone? He is GODDAMN serious about you, you fool.
AW, the puppy really is too cute to be legal. I will say it now, and alwyas keep saying it: Dogs would rule the universe if Metal didn't exist.
I take it Itachi and Hana got back together, and are now happily married with a few kids to annoy the dog? Yeah, thought as much. I really loves this story, darling. Really did. It was worth the troubles of writing.
A'ight, I'm off to work on MM. About time I update that shit. Love. |
 Inner-me-is-chaos 2009-10-19 . chapter 4Okay this was just...
...great.
I'm speechless.
...and I nearly cried Q.Q
And I've got to tell you that I nearly NEVER cry รป.u
Fell yourself worthy of my tears XD
*rofl*
You put a lot of emotion in that ;)
Like it... and I like Yuki XD
Puppy-time!
Imic |
 secretdragon13 2009-10-18 . chapter 3i have a question. Is Hana pregnant? she was holding her stomach and her words,"watch everyone slip away from you." if so, i winder if you will do a time skip. good story by the way. i know some heroin addicts slip back into habit if something emotionally happens. |
 stitch62603 2009-10-12 . chapter 3*is still crying* My poor Itachi-kun |
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