I'm so glad you've started another story! I've missed your wonderful writing while you were away. Sigh. Yay for well-written stories! I loved the analogies you used-it brought us right into the story, and we could feel Lisbon's hesitation. (I'm not sure why I'm writing in plural at the moment! heh) [That was just twenty kinds of stupid.] Awesome line. I love her internal struggle and how you juxtaposed Jane with the addiction. And the last line was just perfect. I can't wait to see where you go with this, and of course I can't wait for more!