Not too bad. Very interesting.

It was okay. Though, it was a little wrong of you to do what you did to Demona that way. Not even someone as cruel and unforgiving as her didn't deserve that! I'm going to put an alternate possibility as to what could/should have been and an alternate ending. Boo-ya!

the best Gargoyles fanfic i have ever read! please if you already havent, make a sequal!

good job

I read this story over and over again because it's one of my favorites but I don't think I've ever stopped to say thanks for the Xanth reference. Every time I read it, it makes me smile. Gotta love word-challenged demonesses with multiple personalities.

Really good. I enjoyed it :)! one thing though, it was long with no breaks. Since it was so long, maybe you should break it up into chapters. Keep writing!

It was awsome!

I loved it.

Keep writting, can't wait for more!