  Maria 9/27/02 . chapter 3 Arlia's too snobby for my liking. Can't stand girls who have a holier than thou attitude, no matter what sob story.
Wish Goku's daughter was angsty and sarcastic but not so mean. Even Vegeta knows better. |
| EEK 9/25/02 . chapter 4 *snarls* LEAVE GOKU ALONE! |
| EEK 9/25/02 . chapter 2 *face faults anime style* WHAT THE! |
| Honeybear 9/2/02 . chapter 4 OK so she ain't dead. great story pleez continue! |
 silverwyvern 2/26/02 . chapter 4That was a great plot twist, and I definitly didn't see it coming. You are a great writer. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more! |
| DemonDancing 2/20/02 . chapter 4 I know i've said this before, but...I LOVE YOU HALO-CHAN! You wrote more for me! Now, write even more!
(Adopt a little lost story TODAY)
Luv, Your Biggest Fan |
| Saiyan Mia 2/19/02 . chapter 4 This is a great story please hurry with the next chapter..._ |
| Lauryn1 2/19/02 . chapter 4 Oh wow! This is an awesome fic! I love Goku, and the fact he has a daughter is just... well it makes me feel all giddy, lol! You left it at such a cliffhanger though! I can't wait for you to continue this! Ya can't leave me hanging here! |
| Nekoni 2/19/02 . chapter 4 *gasp*! Wow! Now that was unexpected! *giggles* you have such a greeeeeeeeat plot and writing style! |
| DemonDancing 2/18/02 . chapter 3 MORE i tell you, MORE!
You seem to take great delight in writing slendidly beautiful and poetic beginings, then abbandonning them like lost children!
Have a heart and adopt a lost story today. as in,
RIGHT NOW WRITE MORE! |
| Princess Tyler Briefs 2/12/02 . chapter 3 Halo! Gah! You! *gr snort* Right more you...you...you person you! ;) |
| DemonDancing 2/12/02 . chapter 3 I LOVE YOU HALO-SAMA! (now write more quickly) This is still an awesome story, so WRITE MORE |
| silverwyvern 2/7/02 . chapter 3 WOW! I love your story. Arlia is a great character and I love her attitude. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to read more! |
| Professor Authordude 2/7/02 . chapter 3 WOW! I love it when bad, or in this case, "bad" dudes turn good. Please do more ASAP! |
| HaloGatomon 2/6/02 . chapter 2 Halo: Wooooooooooooooooooooooooah! I didn't know people would like this fic so much that they'd flame me if they didn't get more! o_O! Well chill guys okie? I've been having writer's block with this fic and I wanted a change so I could get more ideas, which I have! So why don't you go check out my new fic 'The Mirai Stars' while waiting for me to get the next chapter of this fic on here okay? And don't worry, you won't have to wait long okay? _ |
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