interesting. :D nice.

I didn't slap my forehead and exclaim, "Of course!", but I did get a major chortle out of the Beauty and the Beast scene.

Whoa...I'm suprised you're still writing after doing this one. Temporal paradox's and the like usually make my head want to blow-up like some scene from "Scanners" :P Bravo, and Kudos to you.

You're too good, y'know that? Everything works in this story, and what I think I like the most is that Demona and Goliath still remained together. We need more stories like that!