*hee* So cute!

That was so fun. And you totally have their verbal/physical sparring down to a tee. I'd love to see you do more with this- especially in a MA pairing.

You could introduce Alec to the wonders of Cult Films. Ya know; Rocky Horror, Donnie Darko, Star Wars(you know he'd love Leia in the third film). Maybe he could get a game to drive Max crazy.

I love this story! It is soo hilarious, I was cracking up! You should definently, DEFINENTLY make it longer but ... I have no ideas for a plot. *goes, sits in corner, rocks back and forth from low self-esteem, Alec hands me an Oreo, life is happy once more... at least, I wish*

hehe

love, Babs

No plot? No worries! Feckin' hilarious. I loved it intensely. "the fortunate lion has brought down a gazelle..." Go LION! Woo. Love it. You got Max's snotty bitchiness down pat ;)

Giggle. Giggle. SNERK. Gigglegigglegiggle. I love that last bit "The fortunate lion has brought down a gazelle..' Go Lion." This is hilarious.

good story. really funny!

I know I already reviewed this story, but I loved it so much I had to review it again. *g* Seriously, this is hilarious. I was laughing so hard in that kind of gasping, wheezing way while my parents are all, "What is she *on*?" Thanks for the laughs! :-)

I love this fic, it made me heartily laugh and whine to the universe that it could never be filmed, because with the sound effects and the sarcatic commentary and the rough and tumble bickering with Max. I loved the way you played up the feline thing.
I think it works perfectly well as a standalone fic.

I like this story just as it is. A quiet vignette into the lives of our heroes. Alec was too funny. I love watching him get under Max's skin.

I was laughing my ass of for this. You hit the characterization on the head! And my god, i do the exact same thing with my oreos - twist, scrape, scoff. *g* sequel?

HEHEHEE... That was classic.

this is perhaps the most original piece I've ever read... and I loved it! I'm also, quite pleased, and mind you it is never something I can overlook, that you managed to weedle in a bit of Max and Alec interaction there... (it's a healthy obsession, I swear!) Heh heh, definetly cute. Great work!

Sequel!

Sequel!

Sequel!

Heheheheheh...I fell off my chair laughing when I read this. The, "Excuse me, I paid for these" remark totally cracked me up. You are my hero.

This is hilarious! You certainly nailed everyone's personalities right on. Alec seems to have a sixth sense about how best to get on Max's nerves, but then all little brothers do. Please continue with this.