It was a good ending, just needed a little refining!
Good job! Can't wait for the next chapter!

:( Poor Cassandra and Admetus...aww, Victoria's distraught.

That scene with Jemima and Quaxo is lovely :) The devotion to her is clear, and he's willing to wait- it's just sweet.

By the way, how old is Jemima compared to Quaxo? I got curious when he said he needed a cat's love instead of a kitten's.

Well done with this story! I'm in love with your style of writing; the way you portray emotions without stating them much at all is fantastic and pretty hard to pull off for most.
I actually did consider the thought that Musk was Calypso, but only in passing, not very seriously. Anyway...I shall be awaiting the sequel :D so glad you're doing one.

0_o Macavity dead finally hm, does leave you with that empty feeling, Im excited for the aftermath, and of course your sequel

hey lol the long awaited up date :) :) and Im glad you had fun with everything that went on, lol and you ride YAY, I officially love you *but not in the sick, weirdo way* anyways IO did not expect that chapter, and I defiantly went "OH SHIT lol" anyways cant wait to read the next chapter

Uh-oh...some jellies died :O (*smacks self* Jellies?)

I liked these last two chapters, they're dramatic but not overly so, and I never thought I'd see the day that sweet little Demeter would kill someone ^_^ Great job, I had a tingling little thrill in my toes at "I got Bombalurina pregnant!"

Maccy was a little too "soft" here for my tastes; however, I like that he's still a sharp, double-edged sword type, and his insightfulness (erm, insight) added on to his personality, too, so he isn't completely evil.

What a run-on o_o; 8D and yay! A sequel!

you had my attention the entire chapter, It was very well done with enough angst, but not to much to over kill it, I loved the little thing between misto and Jem, and what could Victoria possibility want, Im glad Bomba and Munkus Reunited, they need each other, and is that the end with Calypso...I have a felling something more will happen with all of them

and its up to you if you want you know this story more then anyone lol

great chapter! though your chapters are long, you still keep the reader intrested, making them want more.

I don't think you need to change your rating, unless you plan on making a graphically sexual scene...

anyways, can't wait for more!

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Lots of nice Jemima angst here- not too subtle, not overdone ^_^ it's lovely the way she's handling it all- and the Bomby+Munku reunion is heartwarming. The chapter moved by fairly quickly, but it was steady enough so it's easy to catch onto what's going on.

LOVE the Quaxo/Jemima moment. I wonder what Victoria wants...hmm...

The rating change is up to you, but depends. Do you plan to make the dark parts explicit enough to make an average adolescent cringe? I don't think you'll have to the rating if it's just implications. (it should be fine if you give just enough information for the reader to figure out what's going on without having to go into too much detail). :o Dunno if that was helpful...

Update soon! :)

Haha, I'm okay with the incest, since cats don't really have a concept of incest in the first place. And I like Calypso's story, it's so sad- can't wait for more.

^_^ Nice moment there, Quaxo.

:D Update soon!

I'm glad Jem's ok! I don't think things like incest exist with cats... if that makes sense! I would never have thought to tie Macavity into the story like that... although while I was writing this review I got an idea on how to connect Macavity and Demeter!
Great Job and I can't WAIT for the next chapter!

Wow this chapter was well done, I liked Paniya in this chapter, very wise. And the story about Calypso is told, sad, poor kit, and what about the look between Macavity and Bombalurina, is the kit more then a stray they found ?, and, and Demeter called Bomba heartless, I kind of agree with her a bit
and a little incest never hurt no body, loved this update :)

Very well done chapter...no Bombalurina left *tear oh well* I guess it was going to happen... and Jemima oh Jemima I think I would've done the same thing go after my mother and what is going on With Bombalurina...does it have to do with Macavity

and *Eye blinks a few times" um Calypso's alive ?
Update soon...Ill be looking forward to it

Poor Jem! I'm glad she found friendly cats and people! I can't wait for the next chapter! The new cat seems pretty chill, even for someone who's supposed to be really vain

Aww...Poor Jemima. Now I'm really curious about what Bombalurina's doing :o

Hope you update soon! ^o^

0.o...oh me.
This...Calypso-thing's alive? Hrm...hoom...nice...
I like how this is turning out. Update soon!