Well written. Quotes around the speaking sections would make it easier to read. Otherwise, it's a gem.

This is really good! I love the Flambards books, although I have only read the first one! I would have hoped that you would write more as this is really good.

My only slight problem is when people are speaking, you should use the quotation marks but otherwise I really enjoyed this!

I never really liked Mark/Christina - I always preferred Will/Christina - but I really loved this story. Its so vivid that I almost felt like I was there - and you kept Mark in character so well!

It's been so many years since I read the Flambards books (and watched the series). This was lovely, very vivid. I could almost hear the pounding of hooves and smell the earth!