no offence, but what was the point of that? doesn't have a plot or n e thing! just a couple of sentences. u could have made it better by actually having more than wat u wrote...u could have made a way better story.

:( i fear i'm reaching that stage too...sniff. and i liked free candy

cute but i could be longer and meranda or matt could be in it too.

And the point of this is...?

This story is ok, but I need more of a plot! Get the next chapter out quick so that the story will match the title!